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person moonflower
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i read dis befoore the updates r cool maybe tora could be jous friend seto/jou forever but if he wasn't so creepy i probley wouldn't mind but i
love da fic can't wait for more tori is wied thou either way who ever jou end up with should be a freat fic
person Akala
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...This is very good. But poor Jounouchi..He's like my favorite character, Lol. You write the characters very well, and I can feel their emotions tug at my heart. This is really great so far.

~Akala
person KC
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good story ^.^
person Felidae
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, hmm, hmm, lot's of potential, but might do withpellpellcheck or a beta...I'll keep an eye on this one...
person padg
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to what you do with this story. I have enjoyed what you have written so far very much.
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey sweetie UPDATE SOON PLEASE
and don't let oneida
get you down sweetie
I have been flamed by as as well
and to be honest with you I felt
like giving up, but I thought about it and it would only prove that I was weaker then what she is
and not only that I would have giving up something that I love doing and that is writing
So please hon UPDATE SOON ^___~
oh and so you know I am YugilovesYami
I do hope to see an update from you soon hon
KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK ^__^
person DarkQueen
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you updated! Great update, a lov love the cliff!
Do cintunie soon.
LATER...
person alanna
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated. ARIGATO ARIGATO ARIGATO!!!!!!! now. do it again!(please?) p.s. am i supposed to like tori? cause i really don't even if he did beat up jou's dad. still molested jou in that alley. besides i like seto/jou always have.but if you want me to like this ummm.... whatever the kuso he is then i s'pose i'll have to. you're the author.
person DarkQueen
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! Defini sus suspenful, and alluring!
Good job!
LATER...
person alostblackcat
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bad tori!!!

*thwaks tori*

actually i think l jul just take him so he can't hurt poor joey

Then seto can keep joey company

*attempts to steal tori*

evil tori

*once again thwaks tori*

bad!!!

^_^;;

update soon JBTS!!!