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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!!
this was so so so nice!!!!
if i had an account this would be on my favorites, but i don't but i still really love this fic!!!!
please write more!!!!!!!
this was so so so nice!!!!
if i had an account this would be on my favorites, but i don't but i still really love this fic!!!!
please write more!!!!!!!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I liked it, except that I think you have Joey reacting a bit too drastically to not finding the note Seto left for him. I mean.. he wasn't even near suicidal before Seto showed up. Other than that good job.
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YD: WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT!!! IT'S BEEN CUT OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YD: WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT!!! IT'S BEEN CUT OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If younot not finish this story, I will find you and chain you to your computer until you do! *mock scowl turns into puppy eyes as she pictures Joey and Seto* THIS IS GREAT!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!