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for Butterflies

by DeliaArc

schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful style and flair to your writing. You have the gift.
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! This was great! But the reaction of Mokuba was very disappointing. I wonder if he changed his mind after some thinking. You didn't mention that. After what Seto has done to him... Seto must really tell him the truth. I'm sure that Mokuba will change his mind after that. Seto deserves to be happy. Seto and Jou are so awesome together. It's so sweet to see them so much in love. You must really write a sequel.
person Kimiake
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is amazing! It's so masterfully done and involving! Even if I didn't like yaoi, which I definately do, I'd still like this! You could easily write novels. Please keep writing!!!
person Kimiake
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I want to hear more of what happens to them! Please at least give an epolage...... *looks at her with giant chibi eyes that are filling up with tears* Please....?
person magget
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
perfectly wonderful. i absolutely LOVE it.
person demonwing_12846
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. The portrail of Seto and his inner turmoil. Confronting his fears to the one person he pushes away yet loves the most. Overcoming his terrors by opening himself to new opportunities. This is an epic piece. And to prove this, I would love it if you would take the time to join a group that is completely devoted to the Seto/Jou pairing.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/A_Dragons_Lair/

Demonwing
person Yaky
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was pretty GOOD! Done in excellent detail. GREAT work ^-^!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the ending!
person alostblackcat
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!

the second part was loaded!!

once again i love this fic!!
person Lancer Monna
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow I must truly say what an ingrossing story. Very well done. I liked it all. Only I wish I really knew what happened to Mokuba after he did that horrible thing to Seto< I < I bet he's be scared shitless to find out about all the sacrafices Seto did for him.

Anyways great story and I can't wait to read more form you.
person DarkQueen
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was a totally engrossing 'story', a well done job.

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