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person ChaosLacky

schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM

For a PWP it's got an okay story but it looks like there have been formatting errors where parts of sentences have been cut off. Here are a few examples:

Yugi whined to his other slef. said his other self sadly. said Yugi to Yami. he said to Yugi.

"Well I want you to make love to me." she said taking off his cloths. said Yugi to Yami. said Yami goading Yugi. said Yugi as his member reached about 9 inches and increadibly thick to which the Dark Magician Girl squealed in delight and thought said Yugi.

Also a large part of the text is italized.

person Matt Gross

schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM

This is a very good story. Could you show what happens between Joey and the Lady Assailant of Flames? I want to see what happens when the Lady Assailant seduces Joey.

person the ?

schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM

VERY INTERESTING, CONTINUE!!!!!!

person dale ray ii

schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM

greatest couples yugi/dmg and joey/the lady assilante.
making some more chapters.
thank you
dale ray cameronii

person dale ray ii

schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM

please making some more chapters.
greatest pairing little yugi/Dmg.
please and thank you
dale ray cameronii

person dale ray ii

schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM

i love it.please some more chapters and the best pairing of little yugi/dmg
please and thank you
your friend
dale ray cameronii

person Yugi X Black Magician Girl Fan

schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM

LOL! That story rocks! Best story in the world!

person darkcupid

schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM

ok im asking nicely now....PLEASE UPDATE IVE HAD ENOUGH TORTURE FOR ONE DAY!!!

person Anon

schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM

cool please update a.s.a.p.

person sean sierra

schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM

upload the next chapter please i wanna see what happens to joey and yugi and DMG

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