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for Tears of Betrayal

by foojen

person Anubus
schedule March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read this on fanfiction.net
Why did you put it here? Just wondering....
person LadyJessy
schedule March 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More More More! Also, the pairings are good so far, but i really want to see yugi. Even better would be to see everyone surprised to see Yugi be able to play the shadow games (and/or use the Millinum Puzzel). I mean, he IS Yami's other half, so it is totally possible. I think it is a LITTLE unrealistic that ONLY Item holders can play the shadow games, since there are only t peo people who activly participate, so it wouldn't be hard for Yami to be the undefeated champion. Maybe only people that are in Yami's favor are allowed to play, but only some one with an Item can transport them into the shandow realm to play. Anyways, good story! Next chapter please! :)
person gato
schedule December 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
yes, Anzu can die!! * stabs her a couple times* I hate her to no end *blows her up with pyrokinetic powers* *Dilandau gets jealous* Yes and Yaoi is great! Mai I can stand, but I really don't like her pairing with Jonouchi. Is it just me (and my friend) or is Yugi a slut? Yes he is a slut... a big one at that. He goes with everyone. NOOOO!!!!! *In a Pegasus sort of way* My friend is headbutting me. Well, it's better than Yugi headbutting me (short midget) IMPALEMENT!!! EH, there's only one thing I don't like about your story... can you guess? Yep it's Isis. Do you like Escaflowne? That's where Dilandua comes from. I love Escaflowne (and Folkie!) Maybe I'm rambling a bit too much. It's Fun! Jolly good story mate. *Stupid funny Australian accent*
gatomonangewomon
(and aquaviperus A.K.A. friend or fiend)