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for Tears of Betrayal

by foojen

schedule July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome story I can't wait to read what happens next.... please update as soon as you can
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, you left me hanging.. it's like watching those old Batman episodes where I have to wait .. same Bat-time, same Bat- something.. er yea.. LOL

Plz update!!! maybe Seto (who I actually like.. especially with Malik) can get taken by the summoned skull monster. That bone (er) ought to hurt.. LOL Soryy it's 3 am here and I just make myself snort with laughter. I need to sleep now. LOL

Night
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really should read stories that are finished only...that way when the good bits are about to come up all I have to do is click "next chapter" and all my wishes are fulfilled, right then and there. Instead of me sitting here going "AH!! No next chapter yet!". ;) I like this story though, keep it up! :D
person Yasumi
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remember this story from a few years ago this is like my 4 time reading it over again. Though its been so long I still love it :D I only wish I had been finished :( If i still have hopes of finishing it I'd love to know or perhaps read any u might have read but perhaps never posted. Or maybe its posted somehwere else whatever it might be I love this soooo much!

Yasumi_chan@hotmail.com
person Someone
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This is awsome! Update soon! I want to see a Seto/Isis!!!
person BZLF
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Add the next dang chapter already!!
person Debbie
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was great. I "HATE" cliffhangers. This story kinda ended and that helped. I hope you continue the story soon.
person Sentinel
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was great but I hate cliff-hangers. I hope you will continue.
person Yami Kitsune
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yami Kitsune: Hehehe! The monsters have been released, the torture has only begun, and hell has come to anciet Egypt! Hahahaha!

Rurouni_agra: *Hits her yami over the head* Yami Kitsune no baka! Yami and everyone in Egypt is in danger! *starts biting fingernails.* I'm worried. What's going to happen?

Yami Kitsune: *pull Rurouni's fingers awayfrom her mouth* I take it the suspence is killing you?

Rurouni_agra: YES! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! *stars pulling out hair*

Yami Kitsune: *sigh* please write the next couple of chapters SOON so my Light doesn't chew her fingers off and tear all her hair out. I want to know what Seto is up to. Hehehe. If it's in your way, dispose of it, that's my matto!

Rurouni_agra: You evil, heartless, sonofabitch! *mumbles thinking* Wait, that's what she's suppose to be. *gives up* *sigh* Oh well.

Yami Kitsune: Almost, Light. I am evil and heartless but I am THE bitch, not the son of one. Anyway. We love the story. I love where this is going and Rurouni is dieing of susspence, so hurry with text ext chapters!

person Yasumi
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh. I like this fic alot. Please continue soon. Can't wait to see some more lemon. Tee hee.

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