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for Mercy

by Edmondia

schedule December 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Pure, raw, deep, carnal. Light and shadow mixing together.
person bostafuu
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gods I love your repeats, your descriptiveness, your style. It's like a rhythmic sultry chant. I love it when you squish the words all together in italics to show the desperation and need. I think you're the only one who can write a hot scene without even having graphic sex in it.
person Sarah Costa
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was great. And a hot scene too. Please post more. Ja ne
person Akela
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
perfection.
person Harpie Yamazaki
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's offical now; I'm completely hooked on your stories. ^^ Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can you say erotic? I rather don't know why you haven't got more reviews.
person SoulDreamer
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your writing is so good!! keep up gre great work??? ^^
person Oneida
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Very good job.
person Tegasus
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved the stream of conscience story telling. It really made me feel like I was inside their head. ^_^
person Dchan
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Your dark fics are just awesome!. I love how the flow of the story lets you see inside both of their minds, twisted though they are. I think being stuck in the Puzzle for so long screwed Yami up in a big way.

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