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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay you seem to update quicker this time. Good luck with College^_^
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Kat; why won't he let my puppy go? Man, I'm loving it, but please let my puppy go, let him be with his master, come on you know you want to ^_~ (I know I wan too.) Well, great chapter, please update soon.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That fucking bitch! See, this is the problem with sending people to the Shadow Realm. They come back. Killing her would have been SO much easier.
Write more!
x.Becky.x
Write more!
x.Becky.x
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I have read both of your stories and you are ing ing AMAZING. You are the true definiton of a fan fiction author, and what you do is absolutely perfect. Never stop.
x.Becky.x
x.Becky.x
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is such fun to read! A wonderful sequal! I'm really enjoying it and so look forward to the next update.
The only thing I had a problem with is the bits with the Dream Cloud and Jou. I never could tell if they were in front of the other guys or what? And where exactly is everyone? Are they trapped in a separate room or together? And how did Seto suddenly appear to confront both of them and then disappear? Ya are doing great with the dialogue and the suspenut aut a little more discription of the scenes would be a great help! It would add even more depth to the fic and really straighten out where everyone is and such.
But despite that, I'm still hopeless hooked on this! Poor Seto! And I can't wait to see how ya get the yamis back. Poor Anzu is gonna be in for it. *evil smirk*
The only thing I had a problem with is the bits with the Dream Cloud and Jou. I never could tell if they were in front of the other guys or what? And where exactly is everyone? Are they trapped in a separate room or together? And how did Seto suddenly appear to confront both of them and then disappear? Ya are doing great with the dialogue and the suspenut aut a little more discription of the scenes would be a great help! It would add even more depth to the fic and really straighten out where everyone is and such.
But despite that, I'm still hopeless hooked on this! Poor Seto! And I can't wait to see how ya get the yamis back. Poor Anzu is gonna be in for it. *evil smirk*
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Collage, I remember what a pain was the first time. Now the second time, it's not that bad. I'm already a Spanish major, and going on a computer animator. Good luck to you, and I hope to see you soon!
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry that your computer is down. And im glad that the final chapters will be out. ^_^ Hope you post them soon!^_^
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! I just need to know what happenes Update soon!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good please keep it up i wish to read more
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't review many people unless I really like the story and I really like this one. update soon