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for Golden Opal

by citricacid2001

person YamiKuro
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT! ^_^

I thinkk you should bring Marik in definetly, but thats just cause i love the rat bastard XDD

Loved it, looking very forward to more,
Kuro
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great!! Please update again sooN! I can't wait until the next chapter!! Update soon please!!
person Sazza
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*goes blind* @_-

I mean that in a good way! XD;; The l was was LUUURVELY! >3 Ryou smut is good smut @_@

And now I wish to see more! yeesssshh...@_@

person Moose
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far. The lemon wasn't as long as I would have liked it to be, but the promise of more lemons makes up for that. ^_^ It was a good lemon, though, so keep up with the story! I wanna finish this one. :D

-Moose
person spiderweb
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright...I'm melting. That was so damn sexy and sweet...continue soon! Ryou andura ura are perfect. Then...Malik will come in, won't he? Even MORE PERFECT.
person Uncoordinated Sanctuary
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome, but I keep coming back to see if you updated, more than I could count - and I can count for a long, long time...

Please, can you update soon - like, really soon! PLEASE. I shall be waiting! ^__^

Please, don't be cruel and make us all wait for a month or two! Unless, you already have... I didn't check the date - :P

Anyway, I wanna see some action! *hint, hint* *Cough* Lemon! *Cough* And make sure Bakura keeps in character, and Ryou too! I loved the way you portrayed them both! ^__^

Until next chapter - which better be soon! - see ya! :D
person Britt
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic, plz update as soon as you can!
person Ravenx
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the next chapter!!! This is a really good story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Sazza
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I like! Poor Ryou @_@ You'll write more soon right? XD
person Aurora of the Moon
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiii nice storyry ^^ continue soon plzzzz????