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for Yugi In Bakaland

by Dchan

person Needle
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I feel your frustration from here, and I'm not even an English major! I read this fic about a week ago and more or less expected a MSTing of it, because it was written so...poorly. There is no other word to describe it-I have looked. I'm glad that someone else noticed the author's pissiness as far as criticism goes-gods forbid she EVER gets a REAL flame...people that sensitive should never write fanfics.

person Zizi
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Dchan for not going with the request on Acidflower. She's just to gifted to be mst.

Zizi
person Kris
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm, two reviews in one day. I think that's a record for me. Anyway, just had to say that I you your MSTs. I haven't laughed like this in a long time. Oh, if you take requests, can you do Cross Wire by ACIDFLOWER? I would, but I don't have time right now. And I'm not very good at writing humor.

Hope you write more, Kris
person Shakster
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL.... I honestly have never reviewed an MST before but I was laughing hysterically by the end of this. Now I want to go read your other MSTs. Hehehe.... This was great. ^_^
person Samptra Mistress of the Night
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Msts are all fun when it comes to bad fics and bad writers (like this one) but to do a mst on acidflower is just fucking disgusting.

She’s great writer, sure her grammar is off and she does make many mistakes I hope your fucking happy Kris.
person yugilovesyami
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ever so much hon for not MSTing Acid Flower I thank you for helping her out as well that means so very much to her as well as me. I am so sorry for not revieing soo sooner hon I hope you can for give me. I really do not know how eles to thank you D-chan. I am so very greatful hon thank you once again Luv Ya ^__^
person b§ —
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I swear, i almost died laughing. Fics like the one you're editing drive me absolutely insane. I usually can't even read them all the way through. Keep up the good work, because while I'm sure the original author does not especially appreciate your critique, just about everyone else does. ^_^
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG HOW COULD YOU DO THIS OMG ACID FLOWER IS A GREAT WRITER AND THEN YOU GO AND MAKE FUN OF HER DAMN YOU I HOPE YOU ARCKINCKING HAPPY YES I AM A WRITER AS WELL SO ARE YOU GOING TO PUT ME DOWN AS WELL :( I don't care what you do to me I am still writing weather you LIKE IT OR NOT OMG HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU KRIS HONESTLY THAT IS LOW MST HURTS PEOPLE BUT YOU DON'T SEEM TO UNDERSTAND THAT I may get flamed but I DON'T CARE AT ALL THIS IS SO LOW
person Zizi
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you Kris! Please don't mst Acidflower it's not right to her.


person SugarYuy
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God... I almost died from laughing. I actualtarttarted to cry *wipes a tear away* You are so funny.