rate_review Reviews

DCHAN, I love you! This fic was so bad and you did such a good job with your MST! And you dedicated this to me...*sniff* I feel so loved! Your correction of his author's grammar is just too perfect! Keep going, babe!

For saying what? For asking Dchan if she would MST Crosswire? Big deal. I simply asked a question expressing my opinion. It's not like it's the end of the world. Besides, I didn't flame Acidflower's story, I didn't say it was terrible, I didn't even say it was in the same low league as Yugi in Hentailand. I merely asked if Dchan would MST it, that doesn't automatically mean that the story is a piece of drivel. Seriously, I have no idea why you are all so upset.

For another thing, Acidflower, this is a public forum. You're going to get good reviews and bad. Besides, I didn't say that your story was really bad, I just saidt itt it'd be good MST material. Not all fics that are MSTed are as bad as this one.

Ok, now I understand what the problem is. I didn't finish reading the story. *shakes head* No, I don't find those things funny. Had I finished reading it, I never would have said that. *shrugs* I didn't read it and I did say it. Nothing I say now is going to change that so I'm going to let it rest. You want me for anything, you know where to find me.

D-chan thank you for everything hon I hope you do not think that I am mad at you beacsue i am not mad at you iT'S KRIS who I am mad at you hon. KRIS I CAN NOT FORGIVE YOU FOR SAYING THAT! D-chan ty once again for everything ^_^

D-chan thank you for everything hon I hope you do not think that I am mad at you beacsue i am not mad at you iT'S KRIS who I am mad at. not you hon. KRIS I CAN NOT FORGIVE YOU FOR SAYING THAT! D-chan ty once again for everything ^_^ sorry just had to fix some errors is all

OK, I've got a few things to say:

1) If you have something to say to me, feel free to e-mail, that's why I put it in there. I very rarely read reviews, I just did this time because I was curious to see if anyone commented on my review.

2) I put it in the review because I'm unfamiliar with AFF and didn't realize I could get the author's e-mail.

3) I didn't know that Acidflower wasn't English speaking. (Yes, I should have taken into consideration that she might not be, but I didn't)

4) Yes, Yugi in Hentailand, is much, much worse then Cross Wire.

5) I don't see MSTs as insults, I see them as having fun. I haven't been MSTed yet, but I've tried to get someone to do it.

6) I am not an English major, I'm an English speaker and I'm not the best at spelling or grammer either.

7) I think Acidflower's fics (from what I've read) have good storylines, but the characterization is off.

8) I can't think of anything else, but if you find anything else I need to address, feel free to e-mail.

*falls over laughing* Gods! I luv reading anything you MST!! It's hilarious!! *grins* Also helps me realize all the horrid spelling/grammatical errors I do ^_^;;;; (which are many!! *dies*)
I know it's mean to enjoy such cruel humor, but I seriously can't stop laughing when it comes to reading your comments. Sometimes I have to reread the author's sentence before understanding your 'suggestions' (shows you how terrible I am at English *sniffles*) but I then find myself laughing even more when I *finally* figure it out ^_^ taking notes in the process to keep myself from making some of those same mistakes ^_^;;;
Ok! Well, once again great job/humor and I hope you don't get too many headaches from reading those fics. *grins and waves*
~YamiRynEnjeru

I have no intention of MSTing Crosswire. I take requests for this sort of thing only if I have considered doing the fic myself. I take fic requests, not MST requests. And ACIDFLOWER, if you ever need a beta or anything, I'd be happy to beta your stuff [In non-MST format, of course] You realize your grammar needs work, can accept constructive criticism, and are actually making an effort to improve. That, I can respect.

Kris

Please be very careful about who you should say their fic needs to be MST. Yes, Acidflower I can tell does put alot of time and effort for her fics. Just compare the "Yugi in Wonderland" to Acidflower's other fics. HELL, I can't even stomach or even read through "Yugi in Wonderland". The author doesn't take constructive critism, her fic is very badly organized, its obvious she doesn't take the time to look through her fic and correct the mistakes, or ask for a beta-reader. Acidflower's fics may have few mistakes true, however she does take critism well which I can tell she has (or still is) greatly improveing, her story ideas are very creative and fits well into the NC-17 catagory. I can tell she does talot lot of time and effort to look through her fics that are in English before posting them. That has to be respected. Also, you must realize even if you and others are English native, even myself, English is a very hard language. Please be more respectful to some authors that has put alot of effort in their fics. If you need to make a request for a MST, then please, e-mail the author instead. I would kindly suggest you not make request like this again over the review page for it to be public. Its very rude and insulting. Make your requests private with a author. But, D-chan has already answered you. But, take this advise for the near future please.

D-chan: Thank you so much for respecting Acidflower's work and for volunteering to beta read her work. You have my respect. Thank you.