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for Yugi In Bakaland

by Dchan

schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My goodness... It's a mst of a show I love that's even better than the msts of a show I only like!

Absolutely love it. Anyone want to tell me Kish and Ryo AREN'T from Tokyo Mew Mew?

I do believe I laughed out loud enough to worry my parents for the rest of the week.

...and any particular reason people are arguing in a review space here? Such childishness...

Good luck on future updates, Dchan-san. (I am fully aware of the double honorific, thank you all...)
person Iyasu
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What... the... fuck...? This is the most random shit that I've ever read. It's funny though, after your comments, anyway.
person Kat
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lordy, I have to quit at chapter four... I'm hurting now! Oh, you missed one thing: "while Machosists take joy in receiving pain," *blinks* I'm Latin and I've never heard of a machosist I k I know what a masochist is. *shakes head* Oi, I need a drink.

Thank you for the laughs!
person Mimiheart
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need these...they help keep me from murdering some authors...really they do. Thanks for the laugh!
person Shakster
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that chapter put me in a good mood... and I'm still laughing.
person someone
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A few mistakes:

Not hat there was really much of one to kill, mind you.]

Not hat? I think you mean not that

[Well, it wouldn’t work very well if decided to catch it later.]

'if decided to catch it later' who decided to catch it later?

[And…? You seem to have no finished the sentence.]

should read 'to have not finished'

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Someone stop and let me off!
DD: Gods...D, hun, you're too funny!
person bakurasgirl
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was priceless!!!!!! DChan, you so rock! This chappie is even better! It would be a good thing, and intelligent, if the writer paid attention to those little asterisked parts. But then again....oh well.
Keep up the good work!
person SK
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funny as all heck. I enjoyed it. However, is there a way you can further separate out your comments from the story itself? The brackets off and on in the middle of things can be a bit muddled. I don't know if you're allowed to use bold tags or whatnot on this site, so I won't suggest anything. (I'm so helpful, eh?)

Keep it up!
person D-chan
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I love HeeroxDuo pairings. And DuoxHeero, and TrowaxQuatre, and just about any other GW pairing as long as Relena isn't involved. Unless she's in the fic for the express purpose of being killed, then it's okay. That lemon was just so horribly done it was ridiculous.