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for To Tell You

by MagicReeni

person D.S.
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should do Out at Sea, it sounds like it will be amazing! Good luck with whatever story if chosen, and remember to have fun writing it! Also, great job on To Tell You, it reallt is Kawaii! See ya!
person OsaP
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww i feel all squishy inside. ^^ that was short, sweet, and uber kyute. i hope ur two friends are very very happi btw. good jorb!
person KC
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: wow, Yugi got it on easy
Yami: *snicker* remember our first kiss?
*blu*blushes* well, i did set up a plan along with my friends
Yami: yea, but at least tell me a HINT!!!
Me: *smirk* you might figure it out so i gave you notes or should i say riddles
Yami: *frowns* no fair, at least i didn't blurted it out that "i love you"
Me: whatever koi, you don't do anything romantic for me and i'm always the one planning on something!!!
Yami: *shrugs and leaves*
Me: *sighed* ignore her Magic! She doesn't really do anything helpful. Anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE YOUR STORIES AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want 'Love is Unexplainable'! I've voted for that one since the beginning of the polls! Please write this one!
person suppi-chan
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaawww!!! =^^= Cute ending! Um... I vote for "It Was Just a Game"! or... the sea one... ^^;
person IYYashi
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: That was so kawii!!
Yumi: To kawii for my taste
Yuji: But you still read it
Yumi: I read it b/c you wanted to read it so shutup
Yuji: Fine. You know I want you to do Out at Sea
Yumi: I want you to do Unexpected Love sounds weird
Yuji: C ya
person youko jaganshi
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love is Unexplainable – Yami and Yugi are twin brothers who
get separated when they’re babies. They meet up again in high school and they
fall in love with each and are very happyh eah each other until Yami’s parents
(both of their parents) tell Yami he can’t date Yugi anymore and they tell him
that Yugi’s really his twin brother that he was separated from when they were
babies.
^^^^^i like that one please it looks like it's gonna turn out to be good!^^^^^
person ms. youko jaganshi
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story i liked it!
keep up the good work
person Nickey
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww update soon plz =^^=
person KC
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: *shocked* i can't wait to see what the surprised is!!!
Yugi's Yami: *pops out of nowhere* what surprised???
Me: *laughs* you have to find out spirit
Yugi: *out of nowhere* yea koi, don't get your hopes up yet!
Yugi's Yami: *pouts* can i look at the next chappie magic? I want to know what happens!!!
Yugi: *looks frightened* NO!!! DON'T GIVE HIM THE NEXT CHAPPIE YET!!! HE HAS TO FIND OUT!!!
Yugi's Yami: why??? I think it has to do something with that tomb-robber! *growls*
Yugi: *laughs* no, but if you wait, i'll give you something good! *purrs*
Yugi's Yami: really? WHAT IS IT KOI???
Me: jeez, you don't have to yell...
Yugi: oh, you'll see... *leaves room*
Yugi's Yami: aren't you going to tell me??? *runs after Yugi*
Me: *sighed* those two are the perfect couple! ANYWAYZ, CONTINUE AND PLEASE LET YUGI TELL YAMI ABOUT HIS SECRET!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after Yugi & Yami*