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for Dead End Street

by Mellybean

person gralnak
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great, don't worry.
can't wait for more.
:)GRALNAK
person Katmon
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!!!! *huggles Kendra and Ryou in celebration* Are they gonna have a baby shower? Can I come!!? PLEASE!!! *bounces around* They're gonna have a baby! They're gonna have a baby!!
Sanzo: *bashes her on the head with his paper fan* Urusei.
KK: *sobs*
Pugio: *dangerous look* Sanzo.... How many times does that make this now?
Sanzo: *sweatdrop* ....eheheh.... Hi, Pugio-sama. Didn't see you there....
Pugio: *pulls out chopsticks* Run, or I'll eat you alive.
Sanzo: With chopsticks? *confused*
Pugio: Juu............
Sanzo: RUNNING!!! *flees*
Pugio: *smirks and crouches down next to KK* You gonna be okay?
KK: *sob, sob*
Pugio: If you're a big girl, you might go to this baby shower if they have one....
KK: *cheers up and starts bouncing off the walls again* They're gonna have a baby! They're gonna have a baby! They're gonna have a baby!
Sazno: *groans and wacks his forehead against the doorframe*

Can't wait for more, as always!!
~KK/KJ/NG
person zatken
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh....too short....but good nonetheless....will read next chappie ;-D
person zatken
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...baby on the way ;-D How cute!

And it's so good that this chapter's long ;-D Update soon, please ;-D
person KC
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *smirk* Ryou? The father???
Yami: *laughs* couldn't think of it that way
Me: Continue!!! When r u going 2 update "Stronger Than Before?"
Yami: did {Dragon} decided if she's going to put the story about Yugi/Yami/Kaiba's wedding???
Me: i doubt it though koi
Yami: I'M GOING 2 KILL HER!!!
Me: Yami, stay calm
Yami: how can i stay calm if she's not going to pose a story about Yugi/Yami/Kaiba's wedding???
Me: *shrugs* oh well, CONTINUE!!! *runs away*
Yami: I'M GOING 2 KILL U IF U DON'T PUT UP THE STORY!!! U BETTER DO IT AND CONTINUE "STRONGER THAN BEFORE" OK??? SEE U!!! *runs after me*
person bakurasgirl
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RYOU'S A DADDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squishes Ryou*
Ryou: X_X
Ryou's gonna be such a great daddy! Awww...chibi Ryou!!!
mmm...Ryou x Kendra...*drools*
Next chappie!!! *cheers*
person IYYashi
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: I kinda new Kendra was going to be pregnant.
Yumi: Really?
Yuji: Yeah. I never thought of Seto as the embaressed type.
Yumi: Cause he isn't
Yuji: Right
Yumi: OK UPATE!!!
person ChocolateCoveredPeaches
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey hey! story so cool! anyway lil innocent Ryou made a baby!! AWWWWW!!! lol
person Lady Elfskye
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ryou's gonna be a papa!!!! Hy!!!y!!!! Yippie!!! It's gonna be hard, though. But, with the friends they have, they are already richer than anyone could be. And that's without Seto's riches! LOL! Hmm, Kura an uncle. This is gonna be fun!! Kendra's mamma can go to hell, far as I'm concerned. More soon!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person shakster
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww..... that was wonderful... how great a sequel to one of my favorite stories on this site.... I want more! ^_^