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for Dead End Street

by Mellybean

person Yaky
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter well done; Things are getting so intense that,
for a minute, I thought that Aaron was going to rape Joey...Oh, poor puppy!
Keep up the great work and update soon!

~Yaky
person bakurasgirl
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOO...the plot thickens....
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holey Chit!!!!!!

Wow, someone is gonna die! And die a very horrible, painful, slow death. *huggles Joey and Tris*


Update as soon as you can!!!

Lady Elfskye
person keisha
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON ... i know that u guys are busy, but please find hope and inspiration from your fans to update!! please!!
person Terra
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura ahs found the one strong point and one down fall to being in love. I want to watch when he guts the guy with a rusty spoon.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*growls* If I killed you then I wouldn't know how this ends. You know that. Ahhh, who am I jokin?? I love this!!! Gods, Kura is gonna kill someone!!!
LOL!! How sweet of Seto to go with Kennie to her appointment!!

Update soon!!!

Lady Elfskye
person IYYashi
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: How could you do this?!!
Yumi: Oh fuck you better update quickly!!
Yuji: Dammit how could you do that to poor Joey
Yumi: You made my Hikari curse?! O_O
Yuji: UPDATE!!
person Yaky
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update. And no, the cliff was just fine, I like cliff hangers ^^;
Update when you can, although I am very anxious to know what will happen to Joey and Yugi. However, I can wait...I think? ^_^;;

~Yaky
person Shakster
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a cliffhanger alright... gosh darn it... I'm angry.... but it was a good chapter so I guess it's okay. I hope ur writing more as I type this... otherwise, I'm going to be upset. No, I'm kidding.
person your wife
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...NOT JOEY!!
Aten: Not Unkie Puppy!!!!!!
Aria: My daddy's not gonna be too happy, that's for sure!

awwwwwwwww.....I wanna hug the unborn chibi Ryou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ME ME ME ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MUST.......HUG........CHIBI!!!!!!!!!!!!1