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for Dead End Street

by Mellybean

person zatken
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!

Tristan's Dad is a bonafide bastard. Unbelievable! **gives Tristan a Seto plushie**

Keep up the good work, guys....and when do we get to see Bakura's "fangs" in this story once more?
person Terra
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man a pregnancy does havoc on the sleep. Poor Kendra she'll never get a good nights sleep til the baby is 5 if then. Can't wait til the club.
person Yaky
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems that ts ars are getting heated by every passing minute.
Whoa, Tris rather freak me out there, but he is ok now, but for how long...?
Club re-opening, hmm...old friend.... doesn’t sound too good, however, before this story is over,
My fingers are going to be without nails. ^^;
Moreover, the baby it kicks, my baby kicks too-- a lot! I am six months now, and cannot wait to get her out of here.
Yes, it's a girl!!! I love your story so much; it is all full of love, angst., passion, mystery, and humor!
Keep up the awesome work, and update when you can!

~Yaky
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolies! New chappie!! Uh, they're going after, hmm, Kennie or Ryou next. Just a guess. Old friend, no idea. Tris really needs to talk to someone. It does help. Maybe someone online?? That way, it can be secured (you know Seto would find a way to make it secure) but sorta anonamous(sp). Dr Cray is an idea too. I just know from personal experence that sometimes it's easier to talk to a stranger than it is to talk to "family". More soon as you can, kay??

Lady Elfskye
person Shakster
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous update... I still worry about who Max, Tony, and Aaron are looking for next. Well, actually if they're after Bakura the only logical answer is Ryou... poor baby... oh well, I await more! ^_^
person zatken
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang...very very bad stuff happening to them.... Ay...when would they ever get a moment's peace...

Love the story, my dears....just like always ;-D
person Myrll_Kun
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Myrll: Hey. Keep writing. It's great. Really. I'm interested on how you get Bakura to behave so well. I mean, sure, he's got a puppy fetish, but still, I like him as an evil killing machine ( Read: sex god) .

I love your writing. Keep up the good work.

Love yas,
Myrll
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person Kschur32
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always this was a good chapter. Poor Joey! Poor Tristan! I have to feel for them. I liked the bit about Joey's shock turnning to anger. Great touch. Waiting for the next chapter.
person Shakster
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good update! Not nearly as bad as I feared. Joey'll be fine... but my face nearly fell off when I read the FOR BRAD line. Good times... that was slick. Liked it a lot. Anyway, take your time with the next part... even if it takes a while... the updates are always worth the wait
person leaf zelindor
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if it's not one thing it's another...gah..i really need to go to bed now, i've been up all day and only slept for 3.5 hours last night..anyway, very good chap! ^_^ ~Leaf~