rate_review Reviews

I want to say that I liked it, but I didn't. It's well written. It potrays accurate emotions. It real life. It's just not something that I want to admit happens. I like the saviour fics because it's fictional. Call me delusionaland naive, but my little bubble world is preferable. It's sad, but true. Horribly overused phrase, but truth hurts.

WAHOO! Really good! Excellent! Please, please, please wriore ore . . . I'd love to see a pairing out of this. You're really a good writer.

Well, I am sorry but I really can give you no criticism. I thought maybe the story was a bit slow, but it still held my attention, so that wat itt it. The way you wrote Jounouchi is beautiful and rather deep. It made him seem more than just a happy-go-lucky stereotype. The relationship between him and his father was also rather well developed. I mean, usually in the 'abusive parent' type of fics the parent is horribly antagonized right to the point of utter loathing. But you pointed out some good parts about Jonouchi's father, showed the reader that while he IS doing something horrible there is something likeable about him too. It made the whole scenario seem more deep and realistic than just the typical 2D good-guy/bad-guy set up. I am deeply impressed. Technically this fic ld mld make me want to claw my eyes out.... you know... parent x kid = BAD... Bu was was all done rather tastefully. And while I do feel sorry for Jounouchi, I am more impressed with how well he manages to handle it all, more impressed with his strength. Yook ook that 'clumsy idiot' mask most people give to him and ran with it, put something even more beautiful behind it.
The last two paragraphs of the story just get to me, though you still managed to make me laugh with the 'late night cable porn' line. The mood isn't so black and heavy that you can't laugh... but it still sits in the pit of your stomach like something grey and awful that you don't want to think about. This whole story was very well done, disturbing in an un-disturbing way. I like it very much (if you haven't noticed yet from the extensive praise I shower you with ^_~).
I hope you do keep on writing good stuff like this... I am definitely looking forward to it.

Oh, it is rare to see a fanfic where Jou just gives up like this... Which makes this fic all the BETTER!!!

Yeah, this one's a nice one. You are gonna con't are you? It's soo rare to find fics like this, it'd be nice if you'd con't it...

But all in all, very nice!!! and original (well, I think it is, but who knows, there could be something similar on the net...)

Hey, me like, yes I said me like, not 'I like this' *giggles* sorry stupid comment! But nah, really I like it, it's good, but no Seto saving Jou? I mean I LOVE Seto/Jou couple there my favorite, yep absolute favorite! For, now plz continue on is really good and ME LIKE *winks* Well, I gotta go, LATER....

YD: OO
DD: OO
YD: Holy shit! That was...
DD: Disturbing.
YD: Are you going to continue?