rate_review Reviews

Excellent chappie I must say....where will it go though? Is Joey gonna end up in some kinda shattered mind state? (wait, he 's already in one....) Will he be saved?

Keep Writin'!
Reviewer #34321

Omg! That was really beautiful.....very depressing, but nice.....I've read fics like this before, where not everyone gets saved and yours ties in with the first on my list! (JaAffeAffection on FFN...Seto/Jou ficcy)

I hope that you could possibly write another like this.....maybe one for Serenity...how much she misses her brother and how she can never see him....*tear tear*

And I hope you got through that tough time in your life... : )

Keep on Smilin' and Writin'
Reviewer #34321

I don't even know where to start. This story ripped my heart out. It's dark and full of despair and entirely believable and true-to-life. I love it. You are amazing. I can't wait to read more. There's more I wanted to say, but words are failing me. *is in awe*

OMG Great chapter hon I hope to see more chapters for you oMG poor Joey this is a great sad fic OMG keep up the greatk hok hon ^__^

i like this fic, it was a nice change of pace..

i kinda got scared for poor jou when they were in the kitchen, i feel sorry for him and his kitchen...

Awww, that's alright I still like it!!! Keep up the great work and bring on the next chapter....
LATER...

Wow, that was Good! I guess, in a sort of disturbing way.
You, see I work with abuse children. Why you ask? Well I'm majoring in Psychology and from what I've 'red' here it seems to me that you may Know something yourself. You portrait the thought of the abuse child in a manner of self reflection and in a level that the child has given everything up, because he/she feels there is nng bng better than what was presented. I admire your work, it's deep thought and maybe could be heart felt. I see many cases like tand and it's still surprising that this is REAL life.....Keep up the GREAT work and Update soon!!!!!!!!

This story is cool! Your language is very good and you handle angst very well.

YD: Now THAT was good!
DD: Very interesting to see into the mind of an abused child...cause that's all he is at this point.
YD: Please keep it up!!

Wowee . . . this is so . . . GROUNDBREAKING. I mean, Joey and his Dad in this kind of relationship is absolutly brand-new, at least, I've never seen it been done before. I love it! It's very interesting and refreshing, to get this whole new view on the Jonouchi-dad story . . . please continue!