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for Homelife

by Ryanookami

person Angel-Belle
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with Jou? Why is he bleeding?
person Polka Dot
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad, but maybe Jou will get the help he needs now.
person Mahayana
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*k* *k* *blink blink blink* ...Katsuya... *wobble* That was touchingly sweet.... and from his father non the less... DAMN IT! YOU'RE TOYING WITH MY EMOTIONS!!! You're making me like his darn, molestorific father! You're mean. ;P
I hope you'll be able to write the next chapter pretty soon, because the worry about 's 's happened to Katsuya is killing me.
btw. The bit about Mokuba signing for Kaiba is an amazingly cute idea! XD *gives thumbs up* You write a cute Mokuba, and heck, he's not even IN this fic. *laughs* You're talented. ^_~
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was sad poor Joey I just hope things get better for him, OMG I am going to cry that was so OMG keep up the great work hon my god you ahve everything down pat I love it keep up the llenllent work hon ^__-
person JoeyFanatic
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woweeeee! This is so cool! The relationship balance is ama, an, and the whole thing is so well written . . . please, please continue! I love reading this!
person Simply_Kim
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
woah... that was cool! I'm really interested on how this fic will progress... the plot's nice, and the way you presented everything was very much a good style. Very effective in the emotional part. ^_^
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG More his is one of my fav fanfics ^__^
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG More this is one of my fav fanfics ^__^
person DarkSyndicate
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW...Oh wow, um yeah. Its good, REALLY good. I just, damn, this story just hits me in a place I thought I'd locked up for a while now. Im not sure if thats good or bad, but I think its good. I fully intend to keep reading and I hope you write more. Poor Jou!! I hope he's ok. This isn't a deathfic is it? I'd still read it if it was, I just dont remember it in the warning. Anyway keep up the good work.
person Jenniyah
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, don't quite get whathapphappening in chapter 3, well, near the end?... is he sick or...just suffering from a break down... hum... Hope u explain next chapter...can't wait... sooo ooooo wanna see, this fic is the BEST!! and you update fast :-)