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by Ryanookami

person Yaky
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First: I'm really sorry for not reviewing in a while!
Second: In response to your previous question; yes I do work with this type of thing. To tell the truth it's only my side job, how you ask? Well, I am a therapist. Though my major is Criminal Psychology; sometimes the case of the person I work with, has been abuse as a child or had been abuse at somepoint in their life. It's hard to trace their whole background, and find that sort of issue. Actually you have to have a pretty strong stomach, to see, read, and hear every eloquent detail. It is hard for me, to go trhough this process.
I do work with children, in my side job. I give therapy, and is the most hard job in the world! They are so innocent, who can dare taint them? That's the question I ask my self everyday, as I go through every one of my patients. Not an easy job, but I'm glad to know that I could at least bring some kind of hope!
In your story I see the reflection of my everyday job. Going ie hoe home/mind of a neglected and abuse child, teeneger or any other person...it's not a pretty picture. And this story has touched my heart deeply, I can see that not everyone is apathetic to the reality of this cruel world. Honest to God, I love your story! Keep up the great work, and sorry again for the late review!

~Jacquelinne
person Joey Fanatic
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOWEEEE! This is such a cool story . . . please, please keep going! I'm anxious to read more! It's like waiting for Return of the King to come out on DVD . . . counting down the seconds . . .
person Amanda
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*dies* You continue to amaze me with this story! And I'm glad you included the graphic scene. It was heartbreakingly real. I can't say it enough, I *love* how you are handling this. I hope that you still have many, many more chapters in you! I want to see everyone's reactions and how Jou handles everyone knowing. I'm a terrible angst addict, and realistic angst is the best kind! I hope to read more soon. You've been really great with the updating, thank you!
person Angel-Belle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are a very good writer! I really love all the drama! Poor Jou...
person Jenniyah
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 2 chapters in a row... Nice job. Hehe, you're right, Hon/jou pairings are rarely seen, I personally think it's because ppl like the jou/kaiba or jou/yugi(yami) or the somewhat popular jou/malik pairings more.... or it's easier to write hum.......

you're doing jou/hon right? Or are u gonna stick w/ the brotherly-love stuff..which is nice too....
Oh can't wait to see what happens to jou when he gets home..... is his dad gonna get mad at him for getting sick? hum... he seemed to care for him quite a bit to actually bring him to the hospital.... hum..... Oh well, guess we'll just have to wait and see....
person leaf zelindor
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you can certainly keep a reader on their toes! -grins- hmmm, as for Honda and Jou....well....it still seems to be best buddies, maybe slightly hinting at something more thatthat's probably all in my yaoi obsessed mind. It doesn't matter, Honda is being a good strong friend for Jou and that's what he needs. And i loved Kaiba's comment, i mean come on, at least the guy actually wrote SOMETHING in the card! -lol- ^_^ i can't wait for more you're doing a fantastic job! ~Leaf~
person alostblackcat
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor poor jou.......

i just wanna go hug him.. i feel so sorry for him

i adore this fic

update soon!!!
person alostblackcat
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor poor jou.......

i just wann hug hug him.. i feel so sorry for him

i adore this fic

update soon!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: There is NOTHING wrong with a Joey/Tris pairing!
YD: Yeah...read our stuff?
DD: thi this is SO good!
YD: We love it.
person xxkurenaixx
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...i just LOVE Jou ANGST!!^___^..hahahaha...its too good^_^
poor Jou...damn that father of his...but Jous letting him do that =[...
come on Jou get some confidence >=[...COME ON KAIBA!!!! HELP
YOUR LOVER OUT!!!!^_____^..hehehehehehe...<~~~CRAZY!!!^^"
hahahaha...well i cant wait to see what more promising torture
you have in store for us^_^....post more soon^___^...

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