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by Ryanookami

person Polka Dot
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If that was Kaiba trying to be nice, eech, he wasn't very good at it.
person Angel-Belle
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was cool!! Yuck, I don't like Jou/Mokuba, sorry. Mokuba's just too young for anybody! Except maybe Rebecca. Anyhoo, sounds to me like Kaiba the Ice King actually cares for our lil' puppy dog, Jou Jou! ^_^
I like this story; please continue!
person Jenniyah
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, is this a kaiba/jou, i thought u were gonna make it honda/jou.... hum, but kaiba/jou is much nicer (well, i think so anyways)
Oh, is he really going to go back...sob, the last part was soo sad. And kaiba ... the things he said....hum......
person DarkQueen
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still impressive...!
person leaf zelindor
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-pets- hmmm how to inspire you..though..you did Kaiba really well...you made him ic...but with a slight hint of oocness that was relaistc for his character ^_^ anyway! -lol- i'm going to run allong now, can't wait for you to update ^_^ when you get to it will be fine ~Leaf~
person Koneko-chan
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scary. This reminds me of back when I lived with my dad, he'd always have me take of him. ::shivers:: Never got incestual, though the way he looked at me scared me . So. So thats why I like this story ;:shrugs::. I can relate.

Mrr...::sits and reads on::.
person Koneko-chan
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::purrs:: Honda's cool.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Damn it! He's gonna end up addicted to those painkillers.
YD: So glad you updated. We've been waiting.
DD: Can't wait for the next chapter.
YD: I think it's time for Tris to make another appearence.
person Amanda
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting for more of this absolutely *amazing* fic! You've really left your readers hanging here! ^_~ I'm anxious to read about how Joey's going to deal with his friends finding out, and on seeing their reactions as well. Please write more soon!
person Polka dot
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow the suspense, what's gonna happen next?