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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME STORY! CCan't wait for mroe ^.^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah this chapter was a little awkward. I thought Kaiba meant just doing stuff around the house, at least I hope so. I don't think Jou can handle any relationship right now. He just needs supportive friends, though it would be fun to watch Yami mind nuke his father.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The last time I read this story was like dduring the Christmas break...Now, I found it again....AND I LOVE IT!!!
It's totally awesome! I like how the characters are not TOTALLY OOC...Nice work on the whole Kaiba moments....That can probably happen on the show.....(for different circumstances....Okay, I'm rambling)
Actually, I like the whole 'philsophical' aspect of chappie eight....It was nice. This story isn't those pointless ones with the whole 'Jou gets raped....Kaiba finds him....' blah blah blah. This one has a good plot and it's more....*for lack of better words* ....nicer to read. I can't explain it, but it's so cool!!!!
Anyway, update soon, alright?
Reviewer #34321
It's totally awesome! I like how the characters are not TOTALLY OOC...Nice work on the whole Kaiba moments....That can probably happen on the show.....(for different circumstances....Okay, I'm rambling)
Actually, I like the whole 'philsophical' aspect of chappie eight....It was nice. This story isn't those pointless ones with the whole 'Jou gets raped....Kaiba finds him....' blah blah blah. This one has a good plot and it's more....*for lack of better words* ....nicer to read. I can't explain it, but it's so cool!!!!
Anyway, update soon, alright?
Reviewer #34321
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I waited weeks for an update and, to be honest-it was worth every single minute. Thank you, for giving Seto a little more dephts, and for Katsuya, to come to realize both his strenghts and flaws. This must be one of the best Jounouchi stories ever, if not *the* best. Kepp going, you're doing awesome!^^
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whooo an update!! XD I am so in love with this story. It's by fa fav favorite Jou-centric fic in the entire fandom. I must have re-read it about 13 times now. lol I can't wait to see what happens next!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, jou kissed kaiba... hum, didn't expect him to sink that low...
Oh, plz make this a jou/kaiba pairing :)...
darn jou, wh y can't he make up his mind already!
this is soo....sad....
but it was intersting that kaiba would stand there, watching jou kill his mansion instead of stopping him...... hum......
Oh, plz make this a jou/kaiba pairing :)...
darn jou, wh y can't he make up his mind already!
this is soo....sad....
but it was intersting that kaiba would stand there, watching jou kill his mansion instead of stopping him...... hum......
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... just... wow. this story is sooooooo freaking amazing. i really hope you'll add more to this in the future. it's goodgood to leave unfinished.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still waiting for the next chapter. I hope you haven't given up on this excellent fic!
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still looking forward to reading more of this ama fic fic! Please update soon! ^_^
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAaaaaaaarrrrrggh!! This story is awesome, you've *got* to continue it, pweease!!!
I like wae way you protrayed both Jou and his father, aswell as the rest of the Yugi-crew. Oh, and I like to see Seto for once 'drawn' as he is. prceptice, cunning, and a complete asshole. Sigh, I love this fic..!
I like wae way you protrayed both Jou and his father, aswell as the rest of the Yugi-crew. Oh, and I like to see Seto for once 'drawn' as he is. prceptice, cunning, and a complete asshole. Sigh, I love this fic..!