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You..must...continue!!!!! SO GOOD!!! I love Jou and Seto, and you did such a wonderful job describing the personalities, and on the description itself!! I really like how Jou turned out too, not just some big goof like the dub makes him to be. A very excellent story which I hope you write to soon!

Mmmm, I absolutely love and adore this fic, no matter how twisted and possibly disturbing it is... *grins* Hehe, and I just adore your characterization of Jou and Seto. They seem so perfect and IC, not to mention the rest of the characters as well. It has this deep meaning to it that you don't find in most fics... am I making any sense? o.O Probably not, ah well... I really, really hope this fic hasn't been abandoned cuz then I'd have to haunt you until you un-abandon it... err... or at least cry histerically and you don't wanna see me cry, its not a pretty picture... I rather violent... -.-; Anyways, brilliant fic, and I truly hope you continue! This fic is worth it!
Kudos

~DarkRoseBlood ^_^

Give me more!! It's really great. I liked what Kaiba said about Mokuba saying that Kaiba and Joun wer were a lot alike. That's what I always thought was the reason that Kaiba always picked on Jounochi, because he's what Kaiba could've been. I never thought of Mokuba picking up on that though. Interesting. Please continue!

I hope this story hasn't been abandoned. It would break my heart. *sniff* This is such an incredibly good fic and I really would like to see what happens next. Please don't give up!

I love this story so much! I check just about every day to see if you've updated. ^_^ I hope to see a new chapter soon! This fic is amazing, and so well-written!

Wow, now that I've finished the whole thing, I think this was AMAZINGLY well written and moving. I especially love the part at the end, where Jou mistakes Kaiba's meaning of other payments. He's just so used to using his body to pay his debts or make his apologies, that he doesn't really get it. It was just amazingly touching....

I'm just so... amazed (I think I'm using that word too much).

I think Seto was written incredibly well too. In fact, I'd love if you read my fic and said what you thought (shameless self-promotion *Cough*)

I'm so incredibly happy to see a new chapter of this fic! *_* Your characterization of Jounouchi is so wonderful. His reactions to the horrible situation he finds himself in are completely believable. His vandalism of Seto's property was out of left field, but again, understandable. Seto's reactions are great, too, at times puzzling, but always intriguing. And Jounouchi at the end there, misinterpreting Seto's meaning... he's so lost... God, it was heartbreaking! Write more!

My gods...

That was so moving... and utterly frightening...

This is one of the best pieces of writing I've seen on here, and deepest.

I TP-ed my cousins' car a couple years ago. In revenge for when they TP-ed my best friend's car.

DD: SQUEEEEEEEE!!!! You updated!!
YD: That was REALLY disturbing.
DD: Yeah, but I can see why Joey'd think he needed to pay with sex.
YD: I think you did a VERY good job balancing Seto.
DD: Can't wait for the next chapter.
YD: Gods! What's Tris gonna say when he finds out about this?