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January 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Yami should think sometimes, lol. You have to keep on! I don't know what number I am but if I review more than once does that count? Say it does, please!
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December 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAY! I love it. As your supposed problem for the plot, well, I think it's a jolly good plot. My favorite part is when Yugi decides that he doesn't want "it". Heheheee... I love this story, please please please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter... if you get around to doing another one. Most of my stories are pwp, and never get finished. (Of course, all they are is poorly written smut.) My friend (aquaviperus) and I plan on posting some of our yaoi fics here. Damn we're so mad at fanfiction.net! (take off the NC-17 stories will ya? I'll make you suffer!)
Perhaps you can enter another character into this. It can be anyone besides a female (Anzu, she can die). Anyone goes. Yugi, in my personal opinion, is a big slut, that's what I like about him. (Also my friend and I claim that he is a hermephradite and a hobbit. He has too many emotions to be a full male, so he must not be. As for the hobbit, well it's just an on going joke. Err.... nevermind.
Back to the point. I. Love. Your. Story. Please write more. Arigato.
Look for my fic in Escaflowne, whenever I can put it up.
gatomonangewomon
Perhaps you can enter another character into this. It can be anyone besides a female (Anzu, she can die). Anyone goes. Yugi, in my personal opinion, is a big slut, that's what I like about him. (Also my friend and I claim that he is a hermephradite and a hobbit. He has too many emotions to be a full male, so he must not be. As for the hobbit, well it's just an on going joke. Err.... nevermind.
Back to the point. I. Love. Your. Story. Please write more. Arigato.
Look for my fic in Escaflowne, whenever I can put it up.
gatomonangewomon
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December 29, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Nice. It's about time you see Yugi not being 'strong' for his Yami. And it's about tim you see Yami going a little further than he should have. Not that I'm not dissappointed in the lack of lemon. Just that I liked how you're teasing the readers. Although just like foreplay, teasing can go too far. If you want to keep the reviewers reading and the reviews a-coming, then you're gonna have to know when the time is right and insert one just for us ^_~
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December 27, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very cute so far! Awesome writing. Off to read the rest!
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December 27, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very cool! I love that. Delay on the lemon, but that's good if it's for plot's sake. ^_____^
Please update soon! This fic rocks!
*adds to fic list*
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Please update soon! This fic rocks!
*adds to fic list*
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December 12, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Aww...that was so sweet! ^_^ And hey...a nice little plot here and there never hurt anyone...it just makes the fic more interesting! Lol. But I must admit...sometimes a PWP is good too ^_~ *sniffle* Poor little Yugi, he thought he was ready and then he panicked in the last second. I feel for the little guy...I really do... And Yami? *shakes head* Really shoulod have remembered that Yugi´s a virgin...no rushing, mister! *_* But anyhoo...I loved your ficlet, it was great. And I, of course, went completely "AWWW" when Yugi explained his predint tnt to Yami, and Yami assured him that he was willing to wait...*sigh*...that was awesome... Good work on the fic! You´re a great writer, quite talented. ^_^
Ja ne, Kari aka The Mistress Of Kari´s Dungeon Of Desires Currently Imprisoning 28 Bishies
Ja ne, Kari aka The Mistress Of Kari´s Dungeon Of Desires Currently Imprisoning 28 Bishies