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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please finish this story cus its amazing
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and continue!!!!! Or e-mail me to tell me when its going to be continued!!!!!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo cute. this is the best bakura/malik i have ever read but its weird how they are 13...sort of not as fun but oh well the rest is soooooooooo goood
please please please!!!! continue this!!!
please please please!!!! continue this!!!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Malik/Bakura/Yami are my favorite pairings or threesome or whatever you call it. 2 out of 3 isn't so bad though. Please update. Thanks
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed every chapter of this story! Please, Please, Please update it cause I've been coming back to see if you had chapter 5 up. I wish there were more writers like you.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic was amazing! I have read many fanfics on the Internet involving child abuse, butrs irs is the first that is actually realistic. Malik's loss of self dignity due to his father's past treatment really shows how this effects children. Even though Malik isn't as frightful, naive, innocent, or submissive as you portray him to be in this fic, he is still very well characterized. I loved the kiss at the end of this chapter. The romance in yfic fic moves relatively slowly, rather than just simply making them screw the moment they meet each other like in so many other fics. Your wonderfully descriptive writing style further adds to my enjoyment in reading this fanfic. Overall, it is beautifully done, and one of the best fanfics I have ever come across on aff.net!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! Genius! You have GOT to update soon!!!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* That chapter had to be the sweetest thing I'v read!! I loved it! Hurry with the next one!!
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't come across fanfiction this good very often. Your plot is obviously well thought
out and very original, and your writing is beautiful and very descriptive. Though the
characters personalities are different from the series, they are still marvelous none the
less.
out and very original, and your writing is beautiful and very descriptive. Though the
characters personalities are different from the series, they are still marvelous none the
less.
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wrfulrful story! I simply love it ^^! You have a great writing style, and how you characterize
Bakura and Malik O_o)!!! Sure, they aren't like in the series (especially Malik), but the story
is wonderful nevertheless ^^. And that means something, 'cause I'm a VERY critical person if
my favorite characters are OOC...
Can't wait to see the next chapter; please update soon! Please!!! >_<
Bakura and Malik O_o)!!! Sure, they aren't like in the series (especially Malik), but the story
is wonderful nevertheless ^^. And that means something, 'cause I'm a VERY critical person if
my favorite characters are OOC...
Can't wait to see the next chapter; please update soon! Please!!! >_<