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That was so very very depressing... Talk about regression! One step forward and two steps back for Malik... Still, it does go to show that they are starting to develop some type of relationship. Bakura's obviously much more empathetic towards Malik but he just can't figure out how to make everything all right between the two of them. Bakura's was never much of a pe pee person in any of his lifetimes anyway... ^_^

Malik is still haunted by his parent and that becomes clear from his comparison with Bakura and his father. I guess I can only hope that Bakura will help Malik chase away his inner demons soon without doing anything, to put it bluntly, stupid. I loved the scene where Malik ends up in the garden and Bakura shows up from behind him. The conversation that they have together was hilarious. Malik is cute when he's flustered!!! (Now I can understand why Bakura likes to tease him... I would poke his nose too!!) That was a terrific dose of angst and a fast update. May the muses bless you with inspiration always!!!!!

Omg! Update update!!!
Pleeeease!!
This is so good! I cant wait to see where Bakura is...and whats up with Malik...
The garden bit is great ^_^
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

Great chapter!!
Poor Malik with the fever! I hope he'll be ok now tho!
Scary dreams he had...
Please update again soonies!
I cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

I'm surprised! That was a really quick update! Though not as much surprised as to how Malik's dream ended up... That was like a walk through the 'twilight zone'... It was very metaphorical. Nice touch with the whole 'Alice in Wonderland' scene! It seems terribly odd that Malik was dreaming of Bakura in such a way though. After all, they both are still in ancient Egypt so I had initially thought that Malik was having a premonition until the everything just started becoming weird or... weirder would be more accurate.

I feel so sorry for Malik!! He just appears to be going through so many horrible ordeals one after another. What's hilarious though is that he always ends up unconscious when it comes to bathing... LoL! Their relationship is starting to develop and it's not just one of those 'he's-so-beautiful-I-need-to-fuck-him' kind of relationship. I'm excited to see what you have planned next. The anticipation is killing me! And I loved the beginning of the story. I'm a total fluff addict.

Forgive me pleeeeease pleeeeease forgive me for mentioning the thing about Bakura's name, I read it sommewhere I don't remember. Anyway, painfully short chapter buuuuuu *needs more Aurora goodness* But the dream sequence wondwonderful, I especially liked the little jackal thing :D. And I liked reading a long bit on Bakura's persepective. Wasn't expecting the update soon but you have made me the happiest fangirl just now!

FINALLY! MORE CHAPTERS! SO HAPPY! THANK U FOR THE GREAT B-DAY PRESANT. LOL. EVEN THOUGH U DIDNT know it was my b-day! PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEASE WRITE MORE! I love your sotry so so much and u gotta finishe it! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE

^________________________________________________________________________________________________________^ YAYNESS!!! MALIK'S ALL BETTER!!!!!! Oooooooooooooooooooooooooo, UPDATE KK?

SWEET HOLLY JEEZUZ! This story is great, a little cheesy but really awesome. I definately need to read more! When might the next chapter come out? I love the idea of ancient Egypt Bakura/Malik it's great! BTW I think the name of Yami Bakura in ancient Egypt was Akefia o_O though the page I check might be wrong. Please gimme a shout if you update anytime soon, the suspense is killing me.

WOOHOO! Gotta love molestation.
Poor Malike though, Bakura has a lot of programing to work through and I'm glad he's taking things slowly, even so will the two please just fuck already *snorts*

MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! *pants like a happy puppy*

Hmmm, naked men in the bath *licks lips*
I am hihgly pleased with this chapter. Both Bakura and Malik have suffered so much in their lives, they're meant for each other
Also, I think from all the blood that Malik saw, Bakura's town was killed in those caves and Bakura escaped some how. *interesting*
This match is favoured by the gods oviously and I look forward to seeing this relationship blossom.

As your princess, I encurage you to continue this beautiful story *bows gravefully*