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I am highly pleased with the way chpt 8 unfolded, I'm glad that Malik is well on the way to becoming human but that moment in the altar room *shivers*

I look forward to the next chapter with much zelous and urge you to complete it soon

WOW! I loved chapter 8 and that sceen in the anubis roomn was uber creepy *crocks her whip, Down boy*
I'm glad that Malik kissed Bakura back and I'm glad their love is slowly blossoming, especially with the way Malik was raised. He needs to ease into this realtionship and I'm glad that all of his father's brainwashes is coming undone.

*THREE CHEERS*

Can't w8 2c the next chapter, post it soon please!!!

What the hell? I just noticed that most of chap 6's dream has been cut off. Wtf? where'd it go?

Ah! Even though it was extremely long... I am not satisfied. Great fic. I cannot WAIT for more. Are you going to have them catapult to the future where they meet in Battle City? I hope sho! ^~ Ta for now.
~Astarte Katz~

WHEN IN THE 7 LAIRS OF HELL ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!!!!!!! HUH?????!
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I'VE BEEN WAITING WWWAAAYYY TOO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!! SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue, I'm loving this. And you've left us with so many hints of a plot and multiple subplots. I know I'll keep reading.

He came back!!! Malik's not the only one who was over-joyed. You sure know how to build up the tension in the fic, I was a nervous wreck during the first half of the story! Especially at the part where Malik decided to make a blood offering to Anubis. I was frightened at the propect that this might turn out to be one of those suicide fics. There are no words that can express the true extent of my happiness that that was NOT the case, thank goodness!!!

What was truly curious, besides Malik's odd somewhat prophetic dreams, was Bakura's disappearance. Just why is it that he came back covered in blood stains? I was also really surprised when the statue came to life. At first, I had thought that it was some sort of hallucination caused by Malik's unstable state of mind. It wasn't until Bakura had explained the truth behind the statue that I remembered the incorporation of magic into your fic. It's been a long time since magic has been mentioned so all was forgotten until now. Well, at least their back together again... Malik kissed him back too!!!!! (Swoons)

Wow... lol. I've been a fan of this fic for awhile; I haven't been to aff.net for awhile, so I was very happy to see you'd updated a couple of times (the last chapter I remember reading is chapter 4). I love the way you are going about writing this... pointless smut is good, but building the characters and having meaningful sex (for lack of a better way of putting it) is a lot better to read, on just a general basis. I'm very happy to see the way this story is turning out, and I can't wait for more. ^___^

Wow!! You guys are really working hard on this!! Bakura came back and everything seems to be well between them. I'm really enjoying this and I love the character developments!! Keep up the good work you two!!

O......M......G..... That was SO freakin' awesome! Your writing is exquisite! The plot....Yay! The character portayal... W00T! and just...EVERYTHING! I can't wait for more. Poor Mal....where's Kura? This fic rocks. Update soon. Ta!
~Astarte Katz~