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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! another chapter, me love your fanfic, is the best that i have ever read, please update soon
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The transition of Malik fron slave to 'friend' was great, not too rushed. And wow, I never would have imagined Bakura was 13. Can't wait to find out what happens, if Malik's sister or father will come back into the picture or if we'll get to meet the scary things on the other side of the wall. Update soon!
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy Anniversary! Be happy! I swear I was going to die laughing at this chapter! From beginning to end, the whole thing was hilarious. I especially loved the scene where Malik was trying to cook. He roasted a slice of apple! LoL! Things just got funnier as they took a bath. The fact that they both were naive about sex made for an extremely awkward and embarrassing conversation. Much congratulations to you on those scenes! The dialogue was perfect and fit so well with their character!
Oh, and I especially loved that bit in the end when Bakura commented that Malik looked like him. Talk about foreshadowing! Anyway, I'm grateful that you've updated! Thank you and I'm looking forward to reading and reviewing your next wonderful chapter.
Oh, and I especially loved that bit in the end when Bakura commented that Malik looked like him. Talk about foreshadowing! Anyway, I'm grateful that you've updated! Thank you and I'm looking forward to reading and reviewing your next wonderful chapter.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! A UPDATE! AND A JUICY ONE AT THAT! BOO YA! HAPPY DAY! Oooooooooooh please hurry and write more!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How can you do that? Write such good stories? I mean wow...you had me on the edge of my seat. And chapter nine, wow. You are realyl good at writing. Do you think you can help me with my stories?
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* that was a wonderful ending to that chapter... *re-reads the last few lines*
I'm glad you're developing Malik the way you are... making him bolder while 'thawing' Bakura's attitude, as it were... you're doing an excellent job, and I always look forward to updates. ^__^
I also enjoyed the limy/lemony-ness you placed in this chapter... about time, ne? *grins* It was very nice. ^___^
I'm glad you're developing Malik the way you are... making him bolder while 'thawing' Bakura's attitude, as it were... you're doing an excellent job, and I always look forward to updates. ^__^
I also enjoyed the limy/lemony-ness you placed in this chapter... about time, ne? *grins* It was very nice. ^___^
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool you guys finally updated "Aurora" and I must say, that chapter is very sexy. I must admit I was getting so exicted while reading it...
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a wonderful chapter!! I love how you did the confusion..them trying to figure out what was going on when no one had explained that to them..very well done! I also liked how you still ended it on an amzingly cute note! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"You looked... just like me!"
"Eeeeh-!?"
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...*coughgaspcough*...WAHAHAHAHAHA *gaspgasp*...can't...*gasp*...breathe....WAHAHAHAHAHA...*gasp*
I can just imagine the look on Malik's face when Bakura said this...BWAHAHAHAHAHA...*gasp*...
O.o My weirdest review ever... v.vU
"Eeeeh-!?"
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...*coughgaspcough*...WAHAHAHAHAHA *gaspgasp*...can't...*gasp*...breathe....WAHAHAHAHAHA...*gasp*
I can just imagine the look on Malik's face when Bakura said this...BWAHAHAHAHAHA...*gasp*...
O.o My weirdest review ever... v.vU
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God all I have to say is PERFECT!!! It's worth the wait for every chapter you guys bring up!! Keep up the good work and don't stress out.