rate_review Reviews

this story is fantastic!!!!..it is very well written and has a great sense of emotion to it. i would appreciate it if you could email on your updates so i can continue to read this fabulous story.

OMG...i loved the chapter......i am so glad to hear that you are starting on the story again....you have no idea how happy that makes me....can't wait untill the next one

Can't say anything about the grammar/writing style, but you overdo it on the angst. Malik comes off whiny and it's frustrating.

I've read some of your Yami/Seto stuff, but I have to say this is far better. Not saying the others were bad, really... I think it's just the way you portray Kura and Malik. Good job guys.

Best goddamn YGO fic ever! I totally enjoyed it! Fucking amazing! I'm glad I found this story.You guys are excellent writers.Please update as soon as you can!




~The Paradise Foundation~

I think I already reviewed for the tamer version of your fic, but well, who cares?..
I love this fic, the couple is perfect AND you've written it really well! Although, I'm really scared that Malik's "bad feeling" is gonna turn into something serious (*screams in fear*)
...that will suck...
I love Bakura in this fic, not only for his sweet side, but for his "I'm gonna rip Malik's father to pieces and burn him if I ever meet him when Malik's not around" kinda thing...did that make sense?
Anyway, I can't wait until you update next!!
Love Kim

wow such an ausome fanfiction *winks*

FLUFF MUSH!! FLUUUUUUUUUFF MUUUUUUSH!!!! ^_^ Best fluffy smutty innocent CUTENESS!! I LOVE this story!! I'm just sorry I didn't find it earlier! Y'know, Bakura n' Ryou are my fave couple ever, but your ficcy here is quickly making me see the goodness of change!! I started reaing this on a whim because it had Bakura's name in the summary...Bad reason, huh? But I SO do not regret finding this fluffy romantic masterpeice of innocent and pure LOOOOOOVEE!!! Okay, that was lengthy, but true! ^_^ I've been reading thisa for three days straight, around work and sleep...SO GOOD!! >.< I almost freaked when their ages were revealed, but it only makes sense with the way they act around one another...Again, I wasn't much of a shota fan either, but this is an exception! They're so cute!! ^_^ I just WONDER how they'll discover rimming and anal sex! I bet it'll be cute and fluffy! I adore these characters and their adventures

;-; Yay! Updates!

I luff you. .-.

absolutely wonderful chapter!! Kura should have gutted the jerk! I really hope you can update again soon!!