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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo....Squee!! time for some good ol fashion butt kicking, curtisey of marik and bakura, send huggles and snuggles to baku-kun for me!
person Kanika
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Aten likes his new book *giggle*


*grr* Yami is such a [...]!!
*grr*
How can you do this to little Aten, Yami??
Yami: I do what I....
*punches Yami in the stomach*
I hope that HURTS!!

I don’t like you pharaoh!!

*steps to the side of the battle field*
Go Aten!! Go Aten!!
Kick Yami’s ass!!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*growl* there's no stoppng you is there. When grown men become afraid of threar ear old is one thing but when they endanger their lives is a completly different thing. I think you need to be refreshed on my "Forbidden Four" policy.

AND GINGER TEA CAN KICK CHAI TEA'S ASS!!!!!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still ehre. Looks like I won't be getting that surgery.
I love the gifts and the cards!! Most of them I have never heard of before but then again, I need a job to buy more cards. Hee all those gifts surely suit the group, oh I could so see all their happy faces. But I think Hayden gift to Seto of calling him 'dad' is the sweetest and msot precious gift of all. Next to Bakura's gift to Ryou of the ring. So sweet! But Yami is goina way to far. Please for the love of the Ra, Osiris, and Anubis let Aten win!! And if you're planning on torturing Yami, can I help? Pretty please with naked bishies on top?? *babmi eyes*
person LElfsElfskye
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears from her eyes* He called Seto Dad!!! AWWWW!! Chibis are so cute!!! You used my presents! Thanks! I couldn't really think of anything. They all got some really cool stuff!

reads rest of story.....

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No! I don't think so! Yami v Aten is gonna be good. Aten better win. I cannot believe that he knocked Marik out. Ohh, you are not nice! LOLOL!!

I hope you are feeling much better and get to have some quality cuddle time!

Lady Elfskye
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo... GO ATEN! KICK YAMI'S ASS!.... some one needs to give that pharoah a sound whoopin... kwl if aten's the one to do it.... i can't wait... and do u think they have copies of 'xxx cheesy weeners' lol
person Terra
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great way to pick up my rotten day. Thank You, thank you, thank you for having Hayden call Seto dad. (Tosses shovelfulls of naked snarling Bakuras, naked Otogis, caffine OD-ed naked Tristans. No Setos, am keeping them) Go Miranda tease Seto all day in that gown. Man in 15 years of marriage, lover and I had only 6 Christmaswes together. That's the Navy.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...this duel scares me!!!! *snuggles Aten*
person Caterfree10
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

GRRRRR!!!!! I am beginning to hate Yami more and more in this story. He's cool in the TV series and the Manga, BUT HE'S BEING A PAIN IN THE ASS IN THIS STORY!!!! *Flames in eyes* *Ahem* Anywise, Great chappie, but YAMI RUINED IT!!!!!'S 'S BEING A BASTARD!!!!!!!!!
Kyasarin: Cat, I honestly don't think you should've had that pocky you got from Suncoast today...
Caterfree: YES I DID!!!! It's my...my prescious!
Kyasarin: -_-UUUUUUUUUU
Caterfree: Anywise, I have to go now! Loved the holiday edition!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no. Two lemons are just fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heehee!! So cool!

Man, I hope you get better soon!!

Lady Elfskye