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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just what I needed to give me energy first thing in the morning!! A rip-roaring chappie!! Way to go Ryou!! They say "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" Both Aria and Ryou fit that to a tee!! Do not piss them off! You will die if you do. I know Steven isn't dead, so that means that Marik and Bakura aren't either. Not yet anyways. Wow!! I can't wait for tomorrow!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*resists the urge to scream* Ooh you are the ultimate ruler of cliff hangers and suspence!! Oh man oh man I can't wait for the next chapter and ch 70 AND the sequel to this!! Too bad the nightmare dragon doesn't exist, he'd make a killer card!!
person Dragon Tears
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you DARE kill anyone in the sequel, I will personally torture you in every way possible, and some that not even Bakura and Marik knows... I think my favourite way would have to be making you eat your own flesh... Then again, sticking hooked barbs in to a person's flesh and ripping it out wasn't all that bad either... So, in short, update, and don't kill anyone in the sequel!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I see, Aria truly hates Yami. And when he hurt Aten, that snapped everything in her, bringing out her fullest potential! Wicked!! At least Aten didn't get seriously hurt, as in dead hurt. Oh, man, Steven and Aku are in so much trouble, they have no idea!! Why do I have a feeling that Yami is gonna try and help them. Notice I said *try* cause it ain't gonna help much anyways.


Wednesday, hurry up and get here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lady Elfskye

PS.. Glad to know your feeling better!!!!!!!!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... Please tell me, can we torture Yami after the story? Please? After what he did to poor, adorable Aten he deserves to have the @#$%&* beat out of him. So Aria will beat Yami, and Aku and Steven get punished? *cheers wildly* Perfect!!! Oh yeah, shoot! I forgot my question! *smacks forehead* Oh yeah! I'm sorry I nearly forgot to read this but here I am! Ooh I can't wait for tomorrow!
person Terra
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Man grab the popcorn! It's time for some yamis to kick some butt seriously!!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cocks eyebrow* what are you up to? Should i just not read chapter 70. I get veeeeeeeeeeery sensitive.
person Jade
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
J:how cute, the kids went crazy for their X-mas gifts, so cuuute ^.^::huggles all the chibis::
YJ:::snickering softly::torture seto a little more, that was hilarious having miranda tease him like that.
J: yeah, though Yami is definitly being a bad boy. Your not gonna let aten get hurt are you O.O
YJ: ::growls at Yami::
person Isawa17
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I keep forgetting to check the updates! ^-^ but that dosn't matter bec it it helps the time pass by reading lots of chapters. Well, can't wait for the next update! Ja ne!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aku and Steven punished?!? YES! It's ass kickin' time! I hope Aria's okay!