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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! My! Heehee!! Oh dear! LOVE IT!!!! Yea, I know if there was no Aku, there's no story. Heh, And I know that it is gonna be a good story. Aria is how my son was on the first day of KDG. And only KDG. Now I fight to get him up!! This is gonna get good!! It's GUD!

Waiting as patiently as I can, and loving it!!
Lady Elfskye
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I wish I had the same amount of energy as Marik and Malik. They're like bunnies.....but bunnies with a bondage fetish. Hehe, gotta love bondage!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *falls over laughing* GO MALIK AND MARIK!!
DD: Do you have ANY idea what it's like to get a kid to sleep the night b4 the first day of school? And then to be woken up...repeadetely...by those to sex-crazed freak!
YD: MMMMMMM...sex-crazed freaks.
person ShadowofLight
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughing alot* OMG those two just do not quit!! Man I have no ida who to feel more sorry for and then with Aria waking up her parents at every hour of the night (well nearly). Oh man ^^ Nicely done with the humors and detals and such ^^ can't wait for the next chapter but now I need a nap. I close on my job today *sighs and rolls eyes*
person Caterfree10
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Aww! the chibis are starting school! ^___^ I can garuntee they're gunna have fun! I know I did when I first went to school. Anywise, this ficcy is GREAT!! I bet it's gunna be just as good as the rest of yours, bakurasgirl-sama! I just don't like Aku comin' back *shivers* Oh well. Like you said, without Aku, they're would be no story. Well, I must go now! Please continue again soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! BDSM?!?!? *takes quick cold shower* Sure the RyouxBakura was hott and all but... damn. AND IT WAS ONLY IMPLIED! In short... i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this chapter. Lotta o's : )
person IYYashi
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Haha! Aria is way to excited. I hated school and she is actually happy about it.
Yumi: Good Marik and Malik are ANIMALS!!! HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!
Yuji: Poor Aten. Who is this special friend?
Yumi: ANIMALS!!!!
Yuji: *Sigh* Seeing that my Yami is still dazed I will just say bye for now and UPDATE!!!
person gralnak
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOORAy!
For NEw Story!

Gralnak travels to the ends of the earth to find the perfect monkey for Aten, and then tames him, and gives him to Aten for his birthday.
And if a real monkey is too crazy here's a stuffed one instead.

:)GRALNAK
person Lady Elfskye
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Aku, just go away!!!! Yikes, I'm not sure I like where this is heading already. This is gonna be a darkfic, ain't?? *?? *sighs* Well, let me steel myself up for this, cause there is no way I'm leaving these guys now!! Updates soon!!

Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ATEN AND ARIA!!
DD: Hope you liked your presents!!