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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person IYYashi
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Those two confuse me.
Yumi: Who? Bakura and Marik?
Yuji: Yeah they say they love Ryou and Malik more then anyone in the whole world and yet they say they love each other just as much
Yumi: People can love more then one person
Yuji: But can you love more then one person if you say you love someone more then anything?
Yumi: I suppose.
Yuji: That doesn't make sense!!
Yumi: bakurasgirl don't mind her. just UPDATE!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*dies from laughter attack due to lack of breathing* Oh damn!! That was too funny!! LOLOL! Mmmm...citrus is good!! Lemony goodness next??? Hmm, possibly a foursome?? Maybe closer to the end though, as a celebration of victory over Aku. Lords have mercy, you are such a wonderfully talented writer. I bow before exellence! *bows on floor*

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is poor kids (even the bullies) I mean having Anzu come in and *shviers* Surprsie poor Aten didn't have a ehart attack. But Robbie is the sweetest child and hte bullies... I'm sorry you had such people in your life. Gods above and below they make humanity look bad. Well good story and about teh balloon... um I hope it deflates soon. And Aria certainly loves to squeal alot. She's cute jsut, waaaaay too hyper. Must lay off candy. Hope to see an update soon and I'll try not to miss them! Also I like Umi. I think Mako is a good dad ^^ And the little boy who likes Duel Monsters, hee he's cute.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You are a phenomenal author! It has taken me over a week to catch up reading your fics leading up to Hostile Takeover, but its been well worth my time! Keep the good stuff coming!!!!
person D-chan
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! *glomps* Can't wait to read my scene! ^_^
Awwww....Marik and Bakura are sweet. It's funny, Bakura dun care at all about his thievery and everything else in modern times [Like banishing ppl to the SR], why should he care about monogamy vs. polygamy? [In my YGO RP, Bakura, Ryou, Yami, and Yugi just admitted that they're all in love w/ each other. It's sweet. ^_^]
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Quality time with Ryou....If that doesn't mean hot lemons I don't know what does. LOL, I can't bel Ari Aria did that to Kura. I was laughing so hard! Bakura and Marik naked together in the shower....nice mental picture there. ^.^
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: AAAAAAWWWWWWW!! Cuddly yamis!
YD: GO ARIA!! THAT'S MY GIRL!!
DD: And under NO circumstances is Anzu to say ANYTHING about having chibi Tristans!!
YD: Unless you want to be cut off.
person gralnak
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I now live in fear of the HAPPY BEAR JAMBOREE.

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person D-chan
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the poor chibis! [Classroom brats excepted, of course. They deserve Anzu.] Steven needs to get sent someplace worse for helping to free Aku and let him do this to poor Ryou.
Scene request *crosses fingers*: Light, semi-serious lemon scence involving a tied and blindfolded Marik, ice cubes, feathers, and Malik in a sweetly sadistic mood. Note: Feathers are all the more tortuous if the tips are damp. ^_~
person IYYashi
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YuHow How could you do that to the poor chibis?!
Yumi: Making them go to school is bad enough but......ANZU!!!???
Yuji: I feel sorry for the chibis.
Yumi: She talked about herself naked in front of 3 year olds!!!
Yuji: That is wrong!!
Yumi: *Sigh* But your fic is still de boom. So we can forgive u.
Yuji: Just UPDATE!!