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WTF??? This is soo not good. If she so much as lays a hand on that boy, so help her, 'Kura will rip them off of her. Poor Aten!! And that Barnes woman better lay off, or I'll write myself into the story and lay into her!! (BTW, just kidding!!!) Very good story!!

Lady Elfskye

Another great chapter!!! If I could cuddle little Aten I would right now......what a little honey.....*must cuddle Aten*
I LOVED Aria's description of Unkie Seto's toys!! Kids are SO good at saying those kinds of things!!!!
"Perfect" CLIFFIE!
Looking forward to the next chappie!:-)

*makes pathetic whimpering sounds* Toddlers are so mean : ( Poor mr Cullen. Someone really needs to give the kids the "good touch bad touch" speech. Hell! I still get that speech!

YD: Can I Set Seto for show and tell?
DD: Me first!!
YD: Poor Aten. *snuggles Aten*
Lexi: Aten no cwy. Lexi mate teel bedder. *huggs Aten*

Poor Aten! Poor little guy... Man wish Seto had been there a bit longer or something. He would have showed that bitch Mrs.barnes no one messes with kaiba's family. Anyway love the chapter but do i detect trouble? Like at the end of the chapter, jsut wondering. Can't wait for the next update!

Yuji: Where have I heard that name in the is fic?
Yumi: Should the shrink be trusted?
Yuji: She seems scary! Don't leave her alone with Aten!!
Yumi: If she turns out to be a sicko I'll be very mad!
Yuji: But it was still pretty funny
Yumi: You should of taken a pic of Seto and showed Hayden saying "See you'll be in school like daddy. But you'll be in kindergartOr sOr something like that what school is Hayden going to?) not pre-school."
Yuji: Yumi that's mean
Yumi: But it's Seto's first day and he already got a time out!
Yuji: What? No he didn't
Yumi: It's a joke seeing that he had to stay in the corner
Yuji: Ok bakurasgirl keep going and
Yumi: UPATE!!!

Okay....that was a weird ending. Is there something about Mrs. Callisto you haven't told us about yet. I think t is. is. She gave me the creeps. She just kept pushing aushiushing Aten to tell her things. That is just wrong for her to do. I know from personal experienc jus just hope she doesn't do anything to hurt Aten. I just hope she's not on the bad side. OMG! Aria was so cute with Seto in the "Show and Tell". Hehe, she just doesn't know when to stop. *squshes her* Cute chibi yami.

YD: Man! I would giv give up the opportunity to have Malik!
DD: But in the chibi's room?
YD: OK, I give on that one.
DD: Hey, Aten! Sing the bum song again!!
Lexi: Tan Lexi teesh Awia to ting da bum tong?
YD: Go for it, kiddo.
Lexi: I ave a bum! A Bum! A BUM! No moe-war telts, no moe-war nam-es! I ave a BUM!!
DD: *shakes head*
YD: SQUISH THE CHIBI!!

So that what the dragon looks like... anyway, Uh-oh i smell trouble! I hope the kids will be alright. Unfaithful Guardian... i swear I think i saw that card before... anyway can't wait for the next update!

*evil laughter* I'm takin this better than i thought i would. ^_________^ BTW... for christmas my friend got me this 6 inch Malik doll. It's sooooooooo cute. Anxiously waiting the next chapter hun. Oh, and how did Steven become a duel monster? That was kinda kewl. : )