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OK, That's it!! I am soo gonna kill Aku!! No hurt Aten!! That is just so not good!!! And I hafta wait till chappie 18 for bloodlust??? I already can't wait!!! Aku is a sadistic SOB!!! Ra Damn, Woman! Oh, you mentioned (or DD did...I forget) that you guys seen MJ. Is she OK?? Beside sick that is. I really liked her story and she hadn't updated in awhile...Tell her a fan said HI!! Well, update and I hope I have my computer back by then!

Lady Elfskye

YD: FIVE MINUTES!! All I need is FIVE MINUTESne ine in a soul room with Aku. Just me, him and a little pointy knife!
DD: Go, Dragon!! *cuddles extra Aten plushie* Poor baby. Don't listen to Aku. Your daddy loves you.

Grrrrr.....Aku has got to be one the most aberrant characters I've ever read about. He's so mean! Poor little Aten!
*gives Aku the evil eye*
As for Marik......hang on a second while I grab my drool bucket...... for some reason I found him really sexy when he's drunk!
*smacks self up side the head*
Great Chapter!

IM ALIVE!
what is going on with this Mrs. Callisto?
and what about this new teacher?
does Mrs. Barnes have something to do with him?
Im scared....
:{gralnak

Wow! e the the predicament! Marik should have sent those Oldfield's to the Shadow Realm, no questions ask. And that Eric kid too! Great writing! Keep it up!

YD: AAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!! Umi's sweet on Aria!
DD: Sounds like Otogi is too.
YD: Those idiots are lucky Marik only growled at them! I would have disembowled them!
DD: Ewww.
YD: *squishes Aten plushie* Thanks, babe!
DD: HEY! I want one too!! *pouts*

Yuji: Man I really think Eric should be sent to the Shadow Realm
Yumi: Really? I think Mr. William should. I mean how the fuck did he become a teacher?
Yuji: I can't believe that Rhonda is realated to Tristan.
Yumi: Poor Aria and Aten though. He is completely scared and Aria got hurt too.
Yuji: But we got to find out that Umi has a cute little crush on Aria
Yumi: True but Bakura takes a little crush into a lust thing
Yuji: They're only 3!!!
Yumi: Yeah but Bakura doesn't care I guess. His imagination takes over when it comes to his daughter
Yuji: Well bakurasgirl we can't wait until you update
Yumi: SO UPDATE!!!

O.O How could you write something like that?!? Letting Aria and Aten get beat up! That is just so cruel! I hope something bad happens to the substitute for this. The bastard. Poor Marik. I can understand how he can lose his temper. Not his fault that the people he has to work with are annoying. Ohl...l...I just hope he gets a new job soon.

Man, Oh, Man. No I know what you meant in the review response eariler about the sub. Whatta ass!! Man, Aria got daddy's blood lust, yes she does!! Poor chibis!! *huggles Aria, Aten, and Robbie, And Umi too!!!* Such a sweety!! Poor Marik. Not this, not now... Anywhay, my computer when on the fritz. So I hafta go to the library now to read this. Hope you had a great New Year!!!

Peace!!
Lady Elfskye

Ack no more trouble!! But as for that teacher, mr Williams; okay seems to me he must have been a drill sergant in the army (i'm a army brat so i know ltos about it) but for hte love of anubis that was uncalled for!! and then waht, reading a porno in class? man i hope you let ryou chew his damn ear off. Mr Cullen actually cared about the kids! And i feel sorry for malik for being pssedssed by that asshole demon, forgot his name. And then Marik, hey those assholes would have made a Saint lose his/her temper! but he should have given them a tour of the shadow realm. especially wiht the graveyard!! like to see their faces when they come face to face wiht the reaper of the cards *insane grin* can't wait for the next chapter and MxM action ^^
Oh I also wanted to say I think Aria and umi would make the cutest couple!!! I wanna draw them!! ^^