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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person jadedragon
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a great storie .when will they find out about malik being possesed. see ya
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hayden! And honestly, I'm kinda scared of Aria now and then poor Malik! Now sure what esle to say except that I can't wait for the next chapter! I jsut got off work so forgive me if I'm not very talkative but I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good story so far ^^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry...most of this post must be deleted do ttremtreme profanity......

Arrgghhh!!!! Aria is evil!! Not fair!! Poor Aten and Hayden and Jou-pup! *Smacks Aku and runs like hell* Go Away!!! She is gonna be a handful in more than one way. That she is. Wow!!

Oh, I seen where MJ posted an authors note. Yea!! She's Back!!

Waiting patiently for Saturday and failing miserably
Lady Elfskye
person IYYashi
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Aria is becoming more scary
Yumi: Is she thinking of killing Bakura?
Yuji: Why is she turning so evil? That doesn't sould like a person with the fear of her brother dying. Heck I bet if she hit him a little harder on the chest he might've died
Yumi: Is Aku bringing out the worst in her?
Yuji: So many questions!
Yumi: Please answer them
Yuji: It was a create chap.
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh great!! No Aria's making things disappear!!
DD: Chibi Bakura
YD: Poor Hayden *huggles Hayden*
DD: Poor Puppy *huggles Joey*
person Ryou\'sMisteress265
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* This chapter was sadisticly funny. yes, on my last review I was tad bit emotional that you just kinda tortured my two fav charecters but I do have a teeny tiny microscomic request. Nothing big... just a tad bit of the bashing of "certain" charecter. *sadistic smile* I miss her innocent ways. Thanx for the needless torture hun,
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG so cutan'an't wait for Saturday.
person gralnak
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn You Aku!
Turning Malik into such a ac!!ac!!!
:(GRALNAK
YamiGralnak:When I get my hands on you Aku, Im going to rip yoart art into little pieces! and then send them to the Shadow Realm!!!
AHAHA!!!
Gralnak:o.o
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* I... I... *starts to cry*
person IYYashi
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Aku is sick!
Yumi: How can he say that to poor little Aten!
Yuji: Man, next time can you actually kill Aku
Yuji: So update quickly bye!
Yumi: UPDATE!