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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Revenge is a dish best served cold, eh? Well, then heap up Aku a dish of coldness, cause he will so get what is coming to him!!!! This is so not cool. He will not hurt Aten anymore. Nor Aria. Arrghh!! Fight Malik, Fight!!!!!! Not cool. Lemon coming?? Now that is cool! Robbie and Aten were soo coolies together!!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person IYYashi
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Don't do that to Aten!!
Yumi: Now this getting interesting.
Yuji: Yami you sicko!!
Yumi: Whoa! I didn't mean the Aten thing I promise. I meant about Malik's punishment and how he made Marik cry
Yuji: Hmph.
Yumi: If your going to be like that. Argh! bakurasgirl I for one loved the update and update soon ok. UPDATE!! Bye
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, I can't express how cute Robbie is. Second, finding a job is so not easy so I feel for Marik. third, Thank you for the short yet sweet torture of Aku going through Anzu's mind!! Oh I was actaully laughing!! Too abd they can't jsut lock him in there ^^ Nicely done.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Oh, gods! Too hot...can't breathe!!
YD: *snicker* Seto's afraid of spiders.
DD: So are you.
YD: SHUT UP!!
DD: I KNEW Anzu wasn't human. I knew it!
YD: HAHA!! AKU!! Sucker!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Small peice of revenge, but a revenge I like! Hah!! Serves that dumbass right trying to scan Anzu!! Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Seto *laughs hysterically at image of Seto cowering in a corner* I thought nothing could get to him!!!


Lady Elfskye
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot! *fans her self*
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*freakishly huge smile* Thanx sooooooooo much hun. I don't blame Seto for being scared of spiders. I'm afraid of pretty much anything that has more legs then a dog. that just ain't right. Update soon hun
person gralnak
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YamiGralnak:THAT'S IT! IM COMING FOR YOU AKU!!!*snarls*AND WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON YOU IM GOING TO RIP YOU LIMB FROM LIMB AND EAT YOUR ORGANS!!!!ARHHHH!!!
Gralnak:o.o
:)GRALNAK
person IYYashi
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: So did Aku made Aria say what she said or was that her?
Yumi: Aku is pissing me off! So bad!!
Yuji: Poor Seto. I love spiders! I want a pet spider! But alas I can't get one. I'm to busy to take care of it
Yumi: What's Malik's punishment?
Yuji: UPDATE!!!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm hating Aku more and more every chapter.....*flips Aku off*
I still love Aria...it wasn't her fault Aku/Malik tricked her. Now she's being punished because of it! Poor thing!
*flips Aku off again*