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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Damn that Aku!!
YD: Chocolate sauce, huh? *runs from room*
DD: Where are you going?
YD: To make sure we have chocolate sauce...our birthday is next week.
DD: Oh, yeah! *wicked grin*
person IYYashi
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Ahhh!! *Runs out crying from the sad chap*
Yumi: Is more like it! Bloody and scary with a lemon and lime too! This chap was great it had everything! bakurasgirl I praise you for such a great chap. Really. Well I have to goya. ya. UPDATE
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Ahhh! *Runs crying from the sad chap*
Yumi: Oh god that was great! Bloody and fighting. Lemon and lime. Everything a great chap need. I praise you bakurasgirl for such a great chap! Well bye. UPDATE SOON!!
person PharaohYamisPrincess (don
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I know just how frustrated Marik must feel. I am almost in tears because I can relate to alot of this. Please tell me that Marik and Bakura and gonna find Aku soon! I can't stand this torture to Marik much longer.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all ..... YUMMY!!! Chocolate covered Kura and Ryou!!! Damn that Aku!! I hope they figure out whats going on soon!!! Kura's bloodlust is scary!!! Yummy!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Ryou-Bakura1
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...wow...Chapter 19 was by far one of the best i have ever read form you! It was so descriptive and it kept me on the edge of my seat! I loved it, keep up the great work! You know i luv your stuff!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wicked chappie! I loved it! I gotta make this review short.....I have this overpowering urge to go buy some chocolate syrup
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: *squi Ate Aten*
YD: *squishes Robbie*
DD: *huggles Malik*
YD: *stabs Aku in the eye with a small, pointy knife*
DD: I feel better.
YD: Me too.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! We found Aku's weakness! Anzu!!!! I hope she drives that meany Aku streight to hell with all of her love! Maybe he can feed her some henbane and we can be rid of the both of them! LOL
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!!!!***love that bloodlust***


person ShadowofLight
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know you get it all the time but Aku is evil. Evil evil evil! And poor Marik! I nearly burst into tears! Very talented writnd end excellant story! Can't wait for hte rest ^^ bye now!