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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person ssjgoddesschico
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Remember me? Hmm, prolly not. But anyway! I finally got time to read the rest of 'Watch Over Me' and this story. And I love it so much ^.^ It's so funny. Can't wait to read more!
person PharaohYPrinPrincess
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O I can't believe that Williams and Callisto were doing anything like that! That is so evil! At least Williams is gone now. I swear I would have smacked the living shit out of him if he stayed much longer and kept doing what he did to all the chibis.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Hmfp...damn teacher. Jerk.
YD: *huggles Bakurasgirl* You're REALLY doing our boy some justice, hun.
DD: Tris is so funny in this story.
YD:AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! Gotta run!!!!!!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Freakin Barnes' will get theirs....Let Aria send them all to the Shadow Realm!!! Wow! Yep, they are in sooo much trouble when she hits puberty!!! LOL! Damn! Very, Very coolies chappie!!! Later girl!

Lady Elfskye
person IYYashi
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji & Yumi: *Laughing hysterically* Omigod!! Puberty!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Yuji: Ok that was funny!!!
Yumi: Man when Aria said "BAD TOUCH!" I thought um....Dirty bad touch. Not spanking bad touch
Yuji: I'm glad Ryou forgave them. They were only trying to protect him.
Yumi: Are Aria and Umi going to date at some point or something cause I don't know they seem to like each other
Yuji: Oh god fabulous update please more
Yumi: UPDATE!!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just knew it was gonna backfire not telling Ryou about that. Gods, those two are in soooooo much trouble! Wonderful chappie as usual!!

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JakalQueen: Oh that is it!! *grabs every spell book owns and starts looking for curses* I am gonna so place every curse I can find on that family!! Them and their descendants!!
Me: *sighs* Meet my darker self but i call her JQ for short. While she's researching curses and the likes let me comment. Hee well that teacher did deserve it. isn't it illegal to spank children without parent's consent? Also, I don't rightly blame her. That ass of a bastard deserves to be sent to ShadShadow Realm. I hope he gets eaten bMan-Man-Eater bug.
JakalQueen: He'll give the bug indisgestion!!
Me: Good point... But I can jsut picture a teenage Aria sending a guy to the Shadow Realm for dumping her for...issyissy brat *cough* Rhonda! But Aria and Umi are jsut the cutest things!! Oh I ehard that you're gonna do a sequel to this, a saga if you will, are these two gonna hook up? I think they are jsut too adorable! Okay must go, bye!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a powerful chapter! Excellent work! oh yeah.....tell your wife Happy Birthday from me!
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blows nose* Well, can't say that's I'm surprised and the guys did deserve that. Ryou's the kids' mother and deserves to know. There is no anger known as a mother's rage... or something along those lines. Happy early B-Day to your wife and hope all her wishes come true ^^
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Ryou! He had all right to do what he did to Marik and ra. ra. , ev, even I think they're very wrong for not telling Ryou about this. I know they had good intentions but still. Oh, Happy Birthday to DDYD. ^.^