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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person ShadowofLight
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee take that you asshole!! Hee probably crapped his pants too ^^ But I am so jealous of Aria!! I can actaully picture the chibi yami and the Nightmare Dragon like how you described them, so kawaii!!! Oh yeah, i remember you said you were gonna make a saga/series of this, can't wait!! and I think Umi and Aria are jsut too much (in a good way). Hee teh monsters really love Aria to, their chibi princess yami. Hee hey ya go sweety *hnads over jumbo size bag of m&ms* Too sweet, I can't wait for the next chapter!! oh yeah, is there gonna be anymore anzu basking? she cracks me up ^^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chappie!! Oy, Poor 'Kura!! *squishes Aria* Too cute!!! I feel for Ryou. Miranda seems like a wonderful woman! Aten and Robbie are soo coolies together!! *pulls Aten and Robbie into squishies* Damn that Aku!! OK, Chappie 25 is next. *Steels self* I am ready.


Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: When do I get to kill Aku? Huh?
DD: Robbie's SO cute! "Mr. Aten's mom". Gods! That's SO 3 year old!!
YD: Aria needs to wash her hands!
DD: With sandpaper!!
person IYYashi
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Oh god!! Aria!! Sticky book? How can you do that!!!??
Yumi: Can I guess that Aten's partner might and I'm only saying might be a guy? Or even Robbie? I'm just guessing.
Yuji: Poor Aten he seems so scared.
Yumi: Can't wait for your next update
Yuji: Please hurry?
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee I like Miranda she's so nice and understanding ^^ and Robbie is adorable! Wish kids had his sweet attitude ^^ The cards you mentioned, sweet but for the possessed Malik, well... I want to hit him but I know it's Aku so I really jsut want to shaek him like a rag doll until Aku falls out bu I know you ahev soemthing planned. And about that sticky book... please tell me Aria washed ehr hands? >.< But oveall good, can't wait for the next chapter.
person IYYashi
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yashi: Are you going to do it slowly with every year or are you going to skip some years sometime?
Yumi: What are you going to do to Malik?
Yuji: What Aten? Manhood? Won't that hurt his heart?
Yumi: What I want to know is he going to be like his mother and want to make love or be like his father and just want to fuck. I wonder
Yuji: Why wonder now? He is still 2!!
Yumi: What about Aria? Is she going to like a lot of guys too.
Yuji: Well I can't wait for your update
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person Camille
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was classic! Bakura teaching Aria how to hide a body!

Bakura: Who has daddy's blood lust!

Aria: I DO! I DO!!

Ryou: BAKURA!!! STOP TEACHING HER THAT!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a wonderfully horrible Dragon!!!! Seriously! Princess Aria is *well* protected!! Hmmm.... Thanks in advance for the warning. I'll have time to steal myself. Aria and Umi, Robbie and Aten!! Coolies!!!!!!!!!!


Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: AAAAWWWWWWW...Aria's got a dragon.
DD: REBD following BEWD around like a puppy...too cute.
YD: And you know, Bakura's right...never too early to teach her how to hide a body.
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O...Now I don't know if I am going to want to read that chappie.......sure I am going to probably but they way you put it put me off. Hehe, Nightmare Dragon scared the Blue-Eyes. Never thought I'd see the day when the Blue-Eyes would turn to submission. I love how this is turning out now. ^.^