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Sorry I took so long to review!

POOR YUGI! I hope he'll be ok. And evil Aku for doing all those things!

Yumi: YAAAYYYY!! I'M RIGHT!!
Yuji: So? Anyone could've guessed in time. What I want to know is wgat is so kingking about Aten?
Yumi: I bet it's about Robbie
Yuji: You're obsessed
Yumi: So?
Yuji: Argh!! Can't you care about something else like Bakura...or...or ARIA! I mean for crying out loud she's sick and misses her daddy!!
Yumi: I do care. I just... well you know me
Yuji: say sorry
Yumi: *Sigh* how about something better? This was one again another wonderful chap. It's good that Joey got so well complimented and good comedy that a 3 year old boy got praised by highly artistic people from a museum.
Yuji: UPDATE!!

I LOVE how Ryou told "Auntie Yami" off! Bakura was SO right, Yami's a big ASS. *extends middle finger at Yami with a glare*
I'm eager to find out what Aku did with Seto.......all I can do is hope he didn't kill him!
Wicked chappie! You should write professionally, you're just too good at this!

Ahh cliffhanger! *has heart attack* Hee j/k but talk about your suspense! Waiting for the enxt cahpter. Oh eyah, you know it's about time yami actually be shone that he's not perfect. Usually it's Bakura/Marik teh evil one adn Yamit he saint but this is more unique. You are such a talent writer! Mind if I borrow some of your creative talents?

Woah!! Gone for a few days and all hell breaks loose whilst I am gone!!! Totally awesome chappies!! Damn! Yami is pretty bad and sadistic in the manga, and the very 1st set of anime eps that were never shown here. This really rocks!! *squishes Bakura plushie* Poor chibi Aria. * hands Bakura plushie over to Aria* You need this more than I do, chibi. Wish it was your daddy. Can't wait for tommorow!!

Lady Elfskye
*runs off singing "Tomorrow"*

Bakura can't get out? Not fa*cud*cuddles Ryou* *hopes Bakura will get out soon*

I finally found out how to review, YES! Thank you.
-^^- Enough of that.

I've been reading this story from the beginning without readint the prequels and I got very confused (I'm not now) but it's so good! I love the story, I love your writing! ^^ See, I normally HATE any story with kids or whatever but Aten is sooo cute and Bakura loves Aria so much. ^_^ You're just pulling it off so well. Boor Baku-sama.. :( I know Yami is hurt and thinks that Bakura did it, but I think Bakura should have an allaby or something, or Ryou could tell Yami. I'm not sure. Poor Yugi-kun too.. And Seto! (My absolute favorite) Poor Seto-chan.. And Malik. I will personally KILL Aku for ever doing this to Malik-chan. Hmph!
And if he EVER touches Ryou... GRRRR Bakura is the least of his problems!

Wonderful story! ^^

(Hugs Marik)
S'ok..

Can't wait until tomorrow! ^________^
You rule!

Hey good storie it gets better as it goes . I think yami is'nt being to faere be sides the modern police should haave got him , he didn't even get to defend himself not that iim condoning being a thief but aiectnt eypt they were not always fare . .whats ryou going to think . and marik.

Yuji: That is soooo cute! Robbie and Aten are such adoreable babies
Yumi: Come on it just has to be Robbie. It just has to be.
Yuji: It doesn't have to be.
Yumi: But...I can't believe I'm saying this...That was a cute couple moment as children
Yuji: Hey Robbie could move or something you never know. Aten is still way to young to have a lover and a lot can happen before he is ready.
Yumi: i know but come on!!
Yuji: *Sigh* Yami give it up and be patient!
Yumi: No!
Yuji: Poor Aria was really scared. Wow. I feel sorry for her, Ryou and Bakura. I hope everything turns out ok. Well I can't wait for your next update. I guess I'll see you tomorrow.
Yumi: UPDATE!!!!

Whoa. Poor Bkaura and I agree, Aten and Robbie look so adorable. I'm wondering, if and when he gets turned into a duelmonster, it isn't gonna be a cute one is hand and thank, i'll keep that in mind. aftework i lost all my depression.