AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: *squishes Aten* you're so damn cute!!
DD: Hayden's really come a long way. Good for Joey. It's not easy to have patience sometimes.
person IYYashi
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Poor Aten and Hayden are completely scared. Aten of strangers and Hayden of just plain everybody.
Yumi: Aria really doesn't help too.
Yuji: Yeah. And poor Joey misses Seto. Is Seto getting hurt in the Shadow Rhealm
Yumi: I guess. Maybe. But what Stephen was saying. It makes me so mad! That damn sicko!! Doing that to his grandson who I may add is still a baby!!
Yuji: I know. It makes me soo sad!
Yumi: PLease UDATE!!
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So they seem to know about Seto now? Hmmm, interesting.
person star
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi thanks for answering . This chapter was emotional . You know your ancient eygpt history pretty well . ive been studing it for awhile its fsinating . IFrom what i have read The punish sieverly for robingbs bs . . They were harsh back then and they still are in the middle east in most places .
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How Sweeet!!! That was just tooo cute! LOL!! Wowwies!! Damn, I hope that Seto comes out of this OK. Joey is just too good with the chibis! Wonderful!!

Waiting paitently
Lady Elfskye
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Taps fingers on desk** hmm...Seto.....what could Aku have done with him......wherever he is, Unkie Puppy better start lookin for him!

Aten is so cute! *squishes Aten*

Great chapter!
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aah Kodac moment! Too cute and the deal with Aria sucking her thumb, he now I know why kids suck their thumbs. Really sweet; waiting anxiously for the nexstalstallment!
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Evilffieffie!! Evil Yami! Let Bakura go! His child needs him!!
person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But that whole scene with Aten suckin on Otogi was hillarious! I wish i could... *evil grin* never mind.
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, what's up with Aten?