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I'm such an irresponsible reviewer. College is evil.
Another great chapter though.
God, I feel so bad for Marik but also for Malik who has no idea what's even going on with him..
This is going to ruin all of his relationships and his life. He honestly has nowhereill to go but the cold streets. :-\

And stupid Aku! Because of him, Bakura's in a cold, cold room, naked with only a blanket.

Still a wonderful story though!
I hope someone figures out what's going on soon. :(

Great work!!!

DD: ACK! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
YD: Run, Joey!! Run like the wind!!

Eep! *almost faints* You weren't kidding, no one is safe from that mad man! But is Marik gonna heed Joey's advice? This story has me on the edge of my chair!

Hey How many chapters until yami lets out bakurra . And maybe Marik could try to set him free if he will get over his crying . Yami was doing his job as pharoh along time ago but this time he had know write it was a modern day problem . Bakura could always sue thats what they do in america any way for every thing . im not puting down my country its just people can get a way with murder almost.

GAH! CLIFFIE! I'm in hell! *grin*
Marik's just gotta recover soon and Yami needs to let Bakura out! Aku needs his ass whupped BIGTIME!
Great work!

Yuji: First you take Seto away now you tell us you're going to hurt Joey!!
Yumi: Hikari it' ok. Everything ends happily
Yuji: It better!! I swear.
Yumi: It will I'm pretty sure at least.
Yuji: Fine I'll calm down. She just writes it so well...I
Yumi: I understand
Yuji: And what we all want is for you to
Yumi: UPDATE!!!

hey when will ryou and company find oout about aku? And in in yamis deience even if i thenkk he went alittle to far and is not being fare and a little crule . He iw the one that is in charge its his dutie like it is with many rulers too make sure jutice is being delt oout farely . and that law breakers are punished in in most socities it is wrong to steal and kill . and when some one commets a crime there is punish ment for those crimees no mater how one fells they have aright . example .I work at a grocery store and and if I were to take an apple and not pay for it becausse i feel i deserve it because they do'n t pay me anoth .It is steal and it is wrong and will get fired for doning so .
Plus I t sounds like yami has a lot of pent up anger. Bakuras is also in the wrong because though out your story he has picked on yami un fairly also. Yand imight be wrong but yami has shown him mercy a few times.
sorry i no this sounds dumb but ii had to cleare my mind of thoughts.

Yeah!! Go Aten!! Poor Aria!! Damn Yami!!! Ohhh, I sooo want to hurt someone!!!!! *looks at portal to Shadow Realm* Hmm. Gonna start there....

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DD: Gods! I can SO see Aten in a little tux!
YD: *squishes Aten*
DD: Something tells me Joey's not gonna get the chance to take his painting to the gallery.
YD: And poor Ari*kic*kicks Yami in the crown jewels* Asshole!

You certainly know alot about chibis ^^ First, poor Aira being sick is not fun. Second, Aten is jsut too cute!! Hee the next Picasscio indeed! The old masters could learn from him! Oh and Robbie is so sweet. Happy times are here again!