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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person ShadowofLight
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEE!!! Aten!! *faints then recovers* Update tomorrow?? Oh I am so there!! *fodgets in chair as she awaits for next chapter*
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Hayden and Joey!! And Poor Aten for the next chapter!! Ooh you certainly know how to build up suspense! More plz ^^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*struggles from floor at the beeping of e-mail alert.* Hmmm, next chappie up?? Let's see....


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*passes out cold yet again*


Lady Elfskye
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Evil teaser! I didn't think I could get any more anxious...but I am.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: *sobs* No! Joey!!
YD: You are SO dead, darlin'...you don't even know!!
DD: Wait...she cooked us dinner....
YD: Oh, yeah.ght.ght. S'good too!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you're having to much fun teasing us readers! Now I can't concentrate on my psych homework......I keep thinking about this chapter! LOL
Wicked Wicked Aku! I'm so glad to hear he's going to get what he deserves in the end......gods.....he just gets me so mad! Picking on poor Hayden.......grrrrrr......*long string of explitives*
person IYYashi
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: *Gasp* Oh my god!!
Yumi: Alright that's it! If you really hurt Aten or anyone else I'm going to do something!! I don't know! I'll do something!!
Yuji: And you're the one who said that it's all part of the fic
Yumi: Well now she is just making everyone cry!!
Yuji: Come on Yami. You're just saying that cause it's really good and that makes it worsuse use of the more emotions
Yumi: Yeah so she better ue ane and fix all these problems she causing the gang
Yuji: You heard my Yami
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grabs Steven plushie and tears it to shreads with her teeth and hands* *Aku plushie appears and gets torn apart the same way*

*dies of shock at what she just read*

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Lady Elfskye
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAH! JOEY! HAYDEN! NO!!!

And poor Aten! What's gonna happen to them!?
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO JOEY! AH! I hope he'll be ok!

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