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Usually this would be the point where i would bitch at you for causing my charectes pain... but this is an exception. That chapter brought a strange sense of de ja vu since i uses the EXACT same lyrics in the chapter i wrote yesterday for another story. ^___________^ Me likey evanescence.

*sitting in pile of used tissues with a nearly empty box in lap* That was so sweet and sad. But Aten's gonna be found in the cha chapter? Oh thank you Anubis! *blows nose* But something tells his his won't be good news... Oh damnit! *looks at empty tissue box* I ran out...

hey this is good you know now yami is getting on my nerves now wonder people wanted to kill him hes so uncaring thats asighn of a bad ruler. Aten is just a child . I know that in anient Eygpt they used to make their prisoners slaves . so i wasgoing to ask you if you could do that to bakura in agrement for leting him out of the ring this way yami can still look like hes being a jerk and still in controll. Im not trying to tell what to do i just thought you wouldn't mind a suggiestion i hope you don't mind

Ryou is so gonna shit at Moki & Joey letting Malik stay there. They ain't gonna find anything, cause they ain't looking in the right spot. And they don't know to look there, cause they really don't think about that much. Oy! If only... Hmm, lemon coming up next?? Oy, I can just imagine the side comments from 'Kura!!!! *begins laughing hysterically at the thought of a side-seat sex man* *son looks in and asks if mommy is OK, asks whats so funny about lemons, they're just fruits* *well, ahhh seee, ahhh.... Stands with hand on back of head with sheepish grin on face (a-la Joey) Ummm... ask me when you turn 18*


LOL

Lady Elfskye

*soft growl* Hide......... Now.

YD: *smacks Tris* Get it together, would ya?! Gods, boy!
DD: I can see his point though.
YD: Yeah, but he doesn't have to be so negative about it!
DD: Truth.
YD: Ryou's NOT going to handle this well.
DD: Neither is Marik.

T_T and you have lots more planed? Wow....you sure do like torture...T_T but poor Aten! AND YAMI KNOWS HE'S IN THE SHADOW REALM! *glares at Yami* I want to kick his ass! He might THINK he is still pharaph! But he isn't in Egypt any more, OR in the past. *sigh* heh, I get a little carried away reading fanfics sometimes ^-^

I guessed that ut he is still an ass!! >.< Blood on Aten's clothing?? Oh lord that is so not good!! Waiting for Wednesday to hurry up and appear so I can erad hte next cahpter.

EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE SO EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POOR ATEN! I WANT TO JUMP IN THERE AND KILL AKU AND STEVEN AND SAVE ATEN!!!!!!!!!!

Aria is gonn have kid? With who? Lol, are you ever going to tell us though?