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That's good ^-^ I'm glad they become a couple.........now about Yami. What an ASSHOLE!!!! I have never hated Yami so much! I never knew someone could make him seem so hartless, and make it believible. You have done a wonderful job with that ^-^ But it still pisses me off what he is doing to Ryou and the kids. AND BAKURA !!! If I had the puzzle right now I would take it and destroy it and see how Yami liked it being trapped in that damn thing again. ^-^

OMG that is just too cute!!! Hee naked chibi on the loose! Man kids are the greatest. But now that Ryou and Bakura know that Steven is back waht's gonna happen? Will Aten ever be alright? Will Mr. Cullen ever come back to teaching? Will Marik get out of bed and talk to his son? Will Steven and Aku be punished for good? Will Ryou forgive his deck? Will Yugi talk to Yami? Will Yami continue to be such a @#$%&? Will Malik ever be free? Will Seto be free? Will Joey and Hayden be alright? Will Tristen and Duke have kids oeir eir own? *blinks* Whoops went overboard there. Um have fun answering these questions, bye!!

Awwwwww KAWAII CHIBI'S!!!!!! ^-^ I really liked that chapter! a small brake from all the torture! And I know they are only kids, but Aten and Robbie have to grow up as a couple ^-^ They would be so CUTE togeather!!! ^-^ any way can't wait to read the next chapter! ja ne!!!!!

So cute!!! Aten and Robbie are too much! Damn. There will be hell to pay when Bakura gets out. This is twice now that he has lied to Ryou, yes to protect him, but still, he lied. *growls softly* Steven will die again. Over and over and over and......


Lady Elfskye

Yuji: Awww!
Yumi: Damn that's gotta hurt
Yuji: So cute
Yumi: Hikari that's the first of many kisses
Yuji: I know but still the firsts are the cutest
Yumi: right another great and
Yuji: CUTE!! Chap.
Yumi: UPDATE!!

Aten's back oh thank you Ra!! But the Angel of Change of Heart has a point but then again so does the Devil--oh forget it! That explains how the clothes were found but oh jezus. I hope whoever this visitor is can help Aten heal that last thing he needs is to have Anzu come in and gives the poor thing a heart attack! I'll give you anything I can for you to update and finish this saga! Look I'm nearly in tears! Waiting for tomorrow to hurry and come.

Yuji: Please don't hurt Aten anymore. Being tattoed mine is enough
Yumi: That's thing is going to scar him for life
Yuji: God poor Aten *Sniffles*
Yumi: It's ok Hikari. Hey look at the bright side. At least Aten's alive
Yuji: Yami I don't even want to think of Aten being died!
Yumi: Just think of that as a sign of it being great yet so sad
Yuji: PLease bring the other chap
Yumi: UPDATE!!

cool thanks for writing back

cool thanks for writing back

I love that song. It is so powerful. And so perfect for these guys. I listened to it as I re-read that chappie. I will never be able to hear that song again the same way. And that is a good thing! Poor Ryou. He is all alone right now. Damn. I hope them finding Aten (better or for worse) will snap Marik into action. Ryou really needs him right now, and so does Malik. Such a powerful chappie.


Lady Elfskye