rate_review Reviews

YD: DAMN!
DD: OO

So much emotion in this chapter! I loved it! The part where Marik finally got off his ass and helped Ryou with Aten was so sweet. I loved how Ryou bitched him out first though! Rock on Ryou! Now I feel sad for Seto! The poor guy gets stuck in the Shadow Realm for god knows how long and when he comes back, everybody but his brother is running away from him! What a way to say welcome back! LOL. Great chapter, great fic.

Yami is bbeing a jerk but at least he let Ryou se bakura but he could ad leest tell him tl sy his good buys because the time was up and to say your good byes . Snfd Yugi is right Yami isn't being fare and he isn't in aceint eygpt any more and thats not how we do things now you are at least able to defend himself theres alot rwrong with the ancient ways they never let you defend your self ght ght or wrong .if im right . I like anient history i think they all think the same still even if the the religion is differandt something i notice i might be wrong .I know you probally think im crazy i just like to share my thoughts .see yagood story you always keep it interestiing.
star .
ps thats was funny thoou the only meaat and bayouryour going to get . yes no sex until you lighten up I hope that makees yami back down alttle probaly not though.
star

T_T that was a sad ending to the chapter. and I can't wait until Aria will get back at Yami for every thing he is doing to that family!

*sniff* OMG! Everyone is breaking up, things are going to hell and you're making me so emotional over this! That's hard to do. Just let everyone get back to normal. I think they've been through enough.

Yuji: Oh god I feel so bad for Ryou and Bakura ;_; That was so sad and yet so beautifully sweet
Yumi: Yami is such a fucking Jackass!!
Yuji: *Nods in total agreement*
Yumi: Man If I could I would just love to trap Yami in the sennen puzzle and keep him there! I'm sure Yugi wouldn't mind!
Yuji: True so true! Well another great job!! Talk to ya lata!
Yumi: UPDATE!!

*goes back in time and digs Yami's black heart out with a spoon* Why a spoon?? Because it hurts more!!!!!! Ra-damned Asshole!! Gods, Someone needs to put him in his place, and soon. *hugs Ryou*


Lady Elfskye

*fumes angrily* That... stupid... Ra-damned... heartless... *curses a storm for a while* Okay I got that outta my system for now. Sorry for so many question I had a handful of chocolates and I was in hyper mode. Okay for this chapter It was tender ands weet... but then asshole had to ruin it. Man they weren't kidding when they said love is blind! Awaiting the next chapter and thanks for answering my questions ^.~ Oh and happy belated V-Day!

If Yami doesn't let Bakura out of the ring, I am going to have Foamy the Squirrel decapitate him with a fast flying acorn! Poor Ryou!

An apology for what?! Mrr...someone should take one of the pieces from the Puzzle and remind Yami what it's like to be stuck in a soulroom. Bastard.

Nitpicky grammar thing: 'Otogi stayed with Aten and I' should be 'Otogi stayed with Aten and me.' You wouldn't say 'Otogi stayed with I;' it's not grammatical. Otogi stayed with Aten + Otogi stayed with me= Otogi stayed with Aten and me.

~D-too much Advanced Linguistics for her own good-chan

But I did make a 93 on our 1st LING exam! ^_^