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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness you're okay! You had us reviewers worried! I hate snow. We got dumped on bigtime here by me too. (20 inches or so, yuck! The snow banks are higher than my house in some places! Now we got about 5 feet of the white crap, grrrrrrrr)
Okay, time to review now. I feel bad for like EVERYBODY! (Well, 'cept for Aku, but he doesn't count, he just sucks and I hate him) Will Bakura ever get out of the ring? His sexiness, oops, I mean Ryou needs him!!!
person jenn
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to upsate it?? you said friday and its sunday now! i am mad now i am waiting to see what happens and someone lies about when they are going to update!
person unknown
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ne, it's past friday. So where is the update????? Just wondering.
person bad yami
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you ok you said fridday sorry to be so impaient
person star
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So is yami ever going to lightin up hes loseing all his freinds becuase hes being a jerk he should at leas t take bakura out to defend hiim self Are they ever going to make uup I no i ask this two sequals ago but i was just wonderiing . Ii hoope you do make bakura work alittle bit to work his so called crime off . yaami could have also given them time to say good bye or tell them to say there good byes becauees the time was up even modern jails do that . I had a boyfriend who would end up ther because he woundt pay his tickedts any way good story ./
pss I hoope every thing is ok . you ssaid you were up dating friday . I now things happen i was just wondering
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh by the Love of Anubis... Poor Joey and Hayden. And Seto!! Yugi, hee I knew there was soemthing else I liked about him and Yami can go f*ck himself with a rusted, spike covered club untilbleebleeds to death and have Amut devour his soul for all eternity. The Loving Servant and Helpless Child are cute. Next update not til Friday? Rats but oh well, I can't wait! ^^
person IYYashi
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Poor Ryou...Poor Seto....Poor Hayden......Poor Joey ;_;
Yumi: Seto's not poor he's the richest of them all!
Yuji: So much pain...so much hurting
Yumi: I think Seto's a little hurt hng hng his pup say don't touch him
Yuji: But Hayden is so scared
Yumi: Hey he stood up to Seto. To me I think that's an improvement
Yuji: well....what about Marik
Yumi: He got up and said he loves his kid
Yuji: Yami
Yumi: Forever a fucking asshole son of a bitch and the only meat and balls he's getting for a while is Meatballs (I thought that was very funny! ^_^)
Yuji: You win
Yumi: I always do
Yuji: No you don't.
Yumi: Whatever.
Yuji: ^_^ Another great chap!! I loved it!
Yumi: UPDATE!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holey shit. After all he went thru he comes home to this....poor !! !! Wow! Yugi needs to beat some sense into Yami. It should not be tlacelace of a child to show an adult how to behave. Heh, the only meat and balls he'll get for awhile.. why don't I see that lasting very long?? And not by Yugi's choice either. And it's about time Marik starts getting his ass together. And if the Dark Magician c sen sense Seto and Aten, why couldn't he sense Steven??? Was it due to the curse???


Updates are good!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait...update on Friday??? Argh!! I hope you update before I leave for Minnesota!!! I'll be gone a whole week, so no more chappies for me till I get back.. Why do I suddenly feel like the world( this stories anyway) is going to hell in a handbasket while Igonegone??????


Lady Elfskye
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I hope you enjoy it, Yami, because it’s the only meat and balls you’ll be getting for quite a while,”

HAHAHAHA!