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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person IYYashi
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Why'd Joey do that?! He knows it wasn't Seto. He just has to know!
Yumi: He's hurt and vulnerable Hikari
Yuji: And what about Malik and Marik?!
Yumi: They'll be fine. Aku has to leave sometime
Yuji: Please more!! We want more. We want more!
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person star
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi great chaapter i know im proballly repeating my sself .So you aare going to let bakura out soon aactualy i realy wanted to ask somthing thaat dosn't go with this storbut shadows of the past aare you going to up date that one so9on . and so did yami rape bakura back then or justmake him a temp ssex sllaaave that would be neaat if you did that ffor awhile in conditions on leting him go. thanks .
person Isawa16
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ man, that must suck not being able to use your computer. I know that has happened a couple times, and my mom didn't know how to fix it so I just went out and bought my own. But any way, I love the new chapter! Aku is really pissing me off though, and poor Malik! He is so confused! T_T it's not fun to be confused. Well, can't wait to see the next chapter! Ja ne!
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man poor Joey and Hayden and Seto. With Malik/Aku back things can so not be good! Aria gets into coffee? Isn't she hyper enough?? But, it will be cute to see her on a caffine rush if kinda dangerous. Bakura is gonna be out soon? Odds are you're gonnae a e a sexy reunion asap right? *small grin* Can't wait!
person ssjgoddesschico
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I don't get the chance to review every chapter.

Lol, Aria + coffee is not good..
person Whisper-Chan
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww....2 bad. I thought it woulda been so adorable. ^_^ but tiz your story. Anzu bashing IS fun ^^ poor Malik..;.; Great chappie, once again! I miss Baku-chan ;.; well, keep it up. update tomorrow !? ^_^ yay! hope u enjoyed u'r candy
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey girl-everything okay? I noticed you said you were going to update Friday and well, no update. I noticed you wern't online too......I hope nothing bad has happened! Keep in touch!
Caroline
person Isawa16
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh ^-^ I love this chapter. I really do hope you update tomorrow! You said this chapter would be up friday, and it wasn't. (Hmm...hope that didn't sound rude.....) but oh well, at least it's up. ^-^ that's all that matters. Can't wait to see what happens next! ja ne
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: AKU'S BACK!
DD: RUN ATEN!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that is alot of snow! Mind sending some this way? ^^ This chapter, ooh I'm on the edge of my seat! Least marik is up and about but what's gonna happen next? Ooh I love your story so much! Can't wait for tomorrow.

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