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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person IYYashi
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Yay! Bakura is moving eating is warm!!
Yumi: God I can't wait for the lemon!
Yuji: Oh god poor Malik!! ;_;!!
Yumi: Aww suck it up!
Yuji: He cried. he. he.. he
Yumi: Aku fucking kissed Aten through Malik!!
Yuji: It's sick.
Yumi: Can't wait for more
Yuji: UPDATE!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I meant a Tris x Otogi lemon. That would work!! Ahh, I know Kura needs to recoup. But if you say it's worth the wait, then I know it will be!!!

Wonderful chappie. Damn Aku and Steven! They will get theirs soon!! I have a feeling that the reaction to Malik is not gonna be pretty. Specially now that Malik is fully aware of what he did to them, and why. Damn! Poor Malik!! *hugs*

Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: WHAT?!
DD: Aku made Malik rape Aten?!?!?!
YD: Aku is one DEAD yami!
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! poor Malik, some one should just hide stupid Ryou's Dad's card..feh...or
carze the spell outta the dudes skin so that he dies...quickly! get the healer, Malik's possesd!
don't let him near the little ones...poor bakura,some one should gt him a raw leg of lamb
ome ome thing ne? great story bakurasgirl!
person star
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey you storieees are great i do realy injoy them. I hope Bakura will feel better soon .Why is hewingwing fear is he afraid that yami will come back after him and will yami try it agian hhoopefulynot i hhope he just stays at the game shop when yugi finally decides to let him oout . What made hiim change from Nanny bakura to kkknow he didn't seem so evil then ofr did he justpim pim just cooourios on where you aare gooing. thank you
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* Nice chapter title. Man oh man, you were kidding; when this is done Malik wiht have no sanity or any loved ones left! Gee poor kids... Waiting the next chapter.
PS~ I think Robbie and Aten are hte kawaii thing in the whole world.
person Jade
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::soft snicker fit::oh that was adorable with Aria. "lost a quarter..." hehe cute lil chibi ^.^::hugs the chibi::
::blink blink, tilts head::so when are they gonna realize that its Aku doing all the evil things? and what about Seto, Jand and Hayden, ~please say i spelled his name right x.x~ are they going to be ok?
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: MMMMMMM...Tris and Otogi....
DD: Nice to see Bakura getting better.
YD: The boys are going to have their hands full with Aria, I think.
DD: Poor Aten and Robbie. *huggles the chibis*
person ShadowofLight
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A quarter *snickers* Nice explaination. Malik is gonna be shown what's been happening? Oh man there goes the rest of his sanity... Can't wait!!
person Isawa16
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T_T poor Malik! Poor Aten! just...poor every one! I didn't know any one could be so mean to them! BUT I LIKE IT! ^_^